Good Morning,
A very daring man that he was able to expose himself totally.
Possibly he was being carried away with the music and he has no shame at all .
Funny as it is a rare happening.
Nobody throw stones at him ? Hahaha
Amusingly rare !
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very precious and special free verse poetry with a nice title " Door "
Reading between the lines makes me wish to enter that door when my time comes.
The poem speaks of the great faith in your heart .
Yes.. the door to Paradise I believe is open to one and all who believes that the Lord Jesus Christ is our saviour and we do good deeds while we are alive.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Merry Christmas...
Good Morning,
A joyful poem that fits for the Christmas Season and with an inspiring title :
" Spreading Joy "
The written lines are very meaningful that sends a positive Christmas message.
The lovely picture adds more meaning into this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Very true, as we embrace Joy, our range of feelings expand as we accept the loveliness of true joy .
Now..we all can sing
Joy To The World.
Thank You for sharing this wonderful poem.
Write on
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
Good Morning,
Reading the given title makes me decide to drink our Family Herbal Tea instead of the Medicinal coffee made from Corn grits.
Reading between the lines makes me admire this poem with a philosophical message that it brings.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas. !
Good Morning,
A very intriguing and captivating title of a Free verse poetry:
" The Grip I Fear "
A poem that expresses a very unpleasant and terrible feeling .
I believe that having this fear is truly terrible and horrible.
The poem has a good flow and the it is nicely written and nicely presented.
Write on .
God 🙏 Bless !
Good Morning,
A nicely written and nicely presented work of art with an interesting title :
" Summer Spirits "
The lines are wonderful that fit for the given title.
The conclusion is admirable :
"When summer spirits
spark a bit of bliss "
My favorite line too .
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
Good Morning,
A very inspiring poem with a grateful heart.Reading between the lines makes me say you are greatly blessed and with your grateful heart you will always be blessed.
A special and very precious free verse poetry dedicated to your loving parents .
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
Reading the first paragraph was for me a Shocking part of the story .
A heart attack, a young father and a young husband.
The sad experience at the bank and here comes a taxi driver with the kindness of heart.
Yes...I agree with the last paragraph.
A sad yet a wonderful Christmas Story.
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Merry Christmas...
Good Afternoon,
Oh. Reggie loves it so much and Mommy took the last one .
I can imagine how Reggie felt that serves as an unforgettable memory .
I believe that it's truly delicious...
This is a short story that is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon, captivating as well as very interesting title
"Walking The Antique Mall"
I love antiques and I have some personal collections like old and rare coins and international currencies, old books, old magazines, and many more.
Reading between the lines gives me excitement as you walk alone at the Antique Mall surely you had great finds.
Thank You for sharing.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
WOW!
The red colored letters in each word and each line are truly marvelous and meaningful at this Christmas Season .
A Christmas poetry that expresses the joyful heart ..
Playing Santa to all the grandkids. I can feel the excitement as they open their gifts .
Fascinating gifts especially the Belgian Chocolates... haha haha
My favorite...
I miss my friends in Gent, Belgium reading this part.
Awesome work of art.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Afternoon,
In JESUS NAME.
AMEN.
Thank You LORD . AMEN.
Yes..we need to pray for the safety of the firetruck as well as the people working on it to protect lives and properties.
A very meaningful prayer.
YES !
Prayer is all powerful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
Possibly you are soulmates.
Interesting story but this happens in real life. As in it also happened that they're actually good friends when they were kids and separated by years and oceans apart.
Destiny brings them back together.
A story that in life, possibilities are endless.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
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Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a nice title
" A Beautiful Day "
It speaks of God's wonderful creation and the grateful heart for all the blessings especially this beautiful day .
The poem has a good flow and the rhythm and rhyme is wonderful .
Truly an unforgettable day .
Thank You for the read.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
Tsunami...means nature's fury . The written lines fit for the given title.
It is a situation that is horrible and terrible.
It causes the lost of lives and properties as well as infrastructures.
We pray that this never happens again.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
A very interesting as well as very intriguing free verse poetry .
I admire the conclusion that expresses Hope for a better and brighter tomorrow .
Wherever you are follow your innervoice as it never guide you wrongly.
Keep writing and keep posting on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
The Young at heart and the mind changes every now and then.
Fifteen and now you want to be a teacher .
Let us see next year if this thinking will change...Sooner or later You will be in College and will decide what course you will take
Follow your heart and do your very best
God Bless 🙏 You Always.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
A very active and wonderful cat... nice name indeed :
MAISE
Now it's a great catch, A Fairy.
Written for a prompt.
This is a very interesting story about MAISE adventure and the bringing of gifts to you
whom surely be very busy cleaning it up ..I can relate as I have five cats at home.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Merry Christmas. !
Good Morning,
Interesting message of this work of art whose lines speak clearly about two people.. you and her .. to find
" A place, a time, a dream ".
Wonderful and inspiring line that serves as a conclusion .. Thank You for sharing
" Once Upon A Dream "
Write on .
Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
An interesting and intriguing title of a poem :
" What Is Written On
The Wall "
Reading between the lines I did not notice on what words are really written on the wall ?
And I truly wish to know it.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Morning,
WOW... interesting Crossword Puzzle and the Song itself
"Mele Kalikimaka "
A Hawaiian Song of saying Merry Christmas to You...popularized by
Bing Crosby in the year
1950...( I was not born at that time yet..).
I love the fast tempo of the song, like some of our dialect here in Cebu Philippines whose songs in fast tempo too.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Malipayong Pasko ...
In our Cebuano dialect meaning... Merry Christmas !
Write on
God Bless..
Good Evening,
A very meaningful Prose that is nicely written and nicely presented
all the way .
The message is philosophical and precious.
" Your innermost being, your unobservable consciousness, is not different from that very reality.
Know this truly in the depths of your heart, and there is nothing further to desire or
fear ."
These are admirable words or lines that are my favorite lines in this very special work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
Good Evening,
Oh. He's not alone at all. " I am dancing with the world ,"
I love that line.
Very confident. A heart with strength.
The last line ?
Not a lonely dancing girl but a lovely girl with a heart and that matters a lot.
All in one, this is a very nice work of art.
Unique in its own wonderful way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Evening,
Each line is very meaningful and speaks wisely and nicely as in a Great Advice.
I wish the leaders of all nations or countries can read this so there will be Peace on Earth .
Brilliant Mind !
Highly impressive work of art.
Thank You for the Great read.
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Merry Christmas !
Good Evening,
Yes, much better than telling it and it will not do any good at all.
Reading between the lines makes me agree with the given title
" When Silence Is Best "
My favorite lines
" Because the things
that I could say
Are better left
unsaid "
Wise decision...
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
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