Good Morning,
A Sci- Fi story.
The title gives much excitement and great expectations.
A group of fifty in this momentous trip to another planet called Mars and something to look forward to.
This can be a wise and nice beginning of a very interesting novel exposing and describing the lives of these fifty persons as they are now in Mars.
Surely so many questions with needed answers as they try to explore this new place.
Exciting... I believe so.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt.
Nice title that makes me smile " Nature Songs "
Reading between the lines makes me remember one of my favorite poems in my childhood that me and all my siblings memorized and enjoyed reciting it : All Things Bright And Beautiful...
This is a beautiful poem and very inspiring.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A truthfully written Essay with all honesty and candidness.
Each one of us has a story to tell and not all stories are joyful and not all stories have a happy ending.
It is a matter of acceptance of what is going on with our lives and the way of maneuvering it for a good purpose by moving
forward with a positive outlook .
First and foremost, we must love ourselves first so we can love others making our paths smooth and harmonious.
Surely God makes a way for us to face life courageously and live it with a purpose, with a reason.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Cam and her curiosity only to be responded by irresponsible policemen.
The lines explained clearly the appearance of the haunted house.
Then the appearance of a " hooded figure kneeling over a body "
Surely a horrible sight.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning, interesting title of a free verse poetry:
" Mother Earth "
The message of this well written and nicely presented work of art is philosophical in every way.
Something special as a
Tribute to the world that we all belong.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Who is Pippi ?
Feeding it to him !
Surely this is an Alien story..
I wonder if Danny can keep his promise to Sad.
Intriguing story.
Intriguing ending.
A mystery, I believe so
Thank You for sharing and Thank for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
A Brevee Style of Poetry.
A new form of Poetry that is a new learning to me. Thank You for the great information.
The given title is joyful and meaningful :
"Birds Of Spring"
The nice picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Each line that completed this poetry is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing .
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a brilliant Acrostic writing.
A storytelling in your own unique and wonderful way of writing an Acrostic Poetry form.
Highly admirable work of art telling a story behind the poetry.
Thank You for sharing your talent and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is interesting and captivating as well as intriguing :
" A Few Questions "
The questions that need answers as we continue our journey called life
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that speaks of life's realities.
The last four lines speaks of you being Blessed as it shows your kind heart and soul.
Awesome.
Write on.
Good Morning,
" For love of life does matter "
A very wonderful and positive conclusion and my favorite line too.
This proves that inspite of all the challenges and sad experience in life, there is always Hope as long as one believes the Power Of Love.
Precious !
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Reading between the lines makes me vividly picture a wide open field where very young athletes are playing Soccer and the place is full of excited parents too.
Interesting title:
" Saturday Soccer "
Surely the suspense is there.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Fascinating topic that you are sharing here in this Awesome Community.
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The given title is captivating and very interesting :
"Whispers From
The womb "
A poem that speaks of the wonders of pregnancy.
Highly Impressive.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Oh ..the cat,..
What a disaster that means a great loss...
Goodbye Tea Set..
The story behind the Poetry reminds me of my own collection of Tea Set that are all at the stockroom now piled in boxes as no more space in the kitchen area since our daughter collected too.
Hahaha it is fun collecting them.
The story behind the poetry is really happening as it happens to some of our tea sets at the dining table when our cats were fighting jumping all around and goodbye Tea sets too.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very mysterious man without a face or she was not able to see his face then gone with the wind.
An empty dream or a ghost appeared to her alone and cannot be seen by other people. Maybe she has a third eye.
Reading between the lines makes me curious too who that guy was ...
Truly a mystery...
Write on.
Good Evening,
Yes..."And it's your book." And you are the author of your own life.
The parents are to give advice to do what is right...
That is the great message in this brilliant writing .
Truly an impressive
" Listen My Sons "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The given title is captivating and interesting as well as inspiring:
" Thanksgiving Praise"
Wonderful and admirable lines that completed this work of art.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines that makes this poem an Awesome one.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Written for a prompt.
The story behind the poetry serves as a tribute to the very famous Patron Saint of Ireland.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way that speaks of the life of Saint Patrick.
A sacred writing.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A Joybell Form of poetry.
Great presentation and wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
The given title expresses happy expectations :
" Joyous Morning "
The nice picture of a lovely butterfly adds more meaning into this well written poetry.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A short Essay about the quick trip, the love of Music specifically Elvis Presley music.
Sad to note cousin Laurie borrowed some of Elvis records but was not able to return it and the lesson learned.
Thank You for sharing
" Evening Train To Graceland "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The You Tube Musical video highlights this well written words of Christ that is Biblical and Sacred.
" It Is Finished "
Yes...dying on the Cross for all of us to save from sin.
Very touching and powerful as well as a great example of what a True Love is.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
Live, love and be happy.
But living without love, what is the use of living after all ?
This I believe is the important message of this poetry straight from the heart.
Well...it makes sense to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Interesting title of a nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry:
" Boogie Knight "
Boogie, a dance that my three older sisters gracefully can do it with their dancing partners and the crowd applauded including myself because I am an onlooker because dancing is not my thing ..haha
The story behind the poetry is fascinating, full of challenge yet the boogie Knight gains a very meaningful life as he keeps on dancing with the boogie tune.
Entertaining work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very interesting story about a
" Happy Birthday "
At nine years old, I can see a great celebration already and the heartfelt greetings from the people close to your heart.
Fascinating and truly unforgettable Birthday Celebration .
Happy Birthday !
Write on.
Good Morning,
A short story that.makes me reflect how fast time flies.
Annie as she lost her husband years ago is full of longings yet the presence of her daughter and grandchildren inspires her existence inspite of the fact the " The Hourglass " says it's almost time and life will be over.
Well written.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very nice title of a free verse poetry with a good flow:
" Always "
A poem of continuity of the good things that the Most High keeps on blessing His people.
Wonderful message in this well written and nicely presented work of art as in very inspiring
all the way.
Write on.
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