Good Morning,
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This is very touching, just by reading the given title I can sense a sad Love Story behind the poetry."Sail To Me Upon An Ocean I Wept For You "
Words and lines from the deepest chamber of your heart and soul that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
I wish the person whom this poem was being addressed to can read this and know your deepest feelings.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh..Thanks to Max, Samson found the missing piece...Presto !
There they go..
I wonder if they ever come back
Whatever .it serves the purpose I guess
Entertaining and interesting short story of 299 words.
Thank You for sharing
" To The Future "
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Nice list of people with their unforgettable part of the World History where I firmly believe deserved a distinguished Honor.
Very interesting and informative Word Search that I enjoy reading.
This is truly nice and wise.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
WOW..
This is one of the reasons why I enjoy word search and learn at the same time.
This serves as synonyms too.
Highly admirable word search.
Yes..
Informative and like lesson in an English subject
Thank You for sharing
" Picture Of Innocence "
God 🙏🙏🙏 Bless..
Good Morning,
The captivating title makes me very curious to know what is this
" Say AAA " all about.
Hahaha
Now , I know !
Wonderful and brilliant word search.
Yes.. I like the title was given as well as all the words being written.
Fascinating and marvelous Idea...
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I believe this is about a basketball game.
My late brother in his ginger years was a basketball star... then his two sons like him finished their college education as sports scholars being basketball stars in their universities which I always see to it to watch them play and me as the loudest cheering leader.
Hahahaha
I miss those great moments and I recall as I read this wonderful poem of yours with a captivating title " Madness In Court "
Each line I considered as Perfectly Said or Perfectly Written.
Awesome work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Reading between the lines makes me admire more of these wonderful and colorful creatures which are many at our garden that I enjoy watching as they fly and encircling some of the flowers.
The poem has a good flow and is nicely written and presented direct to the point of admiration of such an awesome observation.
A great read.
Thank You for sharing
"Butterflies "
Write On.
Good Morning,
I have read all of these three stories. You are truly blessed with a great talent to write and I am so
happy for you.
For me, it is not easy to write a story of 100 words yet You did it wonderfully and remarkably.
Splendid !
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Stay Blessed !
Good Morning,
Good to know that nothing or no one can let you down, unless you allow it too.
I believe that is the great and wonderful message of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a captivating title.
Nice rhythm and rhyme too.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On
Good Morning,
Oh..how sad that his good intention turned out that way.
Good to know the result as I read the last line.
A short story full of suspense along with the kindness of heart.
This is nicely written and nicely presented with an interesting title.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Intriguing title and captivating too " What If "
This poem speaks of the girl's disappointments and frustrations in her unpleasant relationship with her family feeling she is not valued her worth.
Truly it is sad to note making me agree that the written lines fit for the given title.
This is well written poetry from the heart.
Then..what if she pours her heart out and talk to the whole family in her situation that she's not happy she's treated that way possibly a harmony begins.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Reading between the lines I believe that Kenneth is very effective in the job assigned to him.
Interesting story with an interesting characters especially Kenneth who handles the situation remarkably.
I admire the creativeness.
This is nicely written all the way.
Thank You for the read
Good Evening,
Sad to note that this is happening nowadays. Very frustrating and disappointing on not to have this joy we used to experience at Summertime.
This is well written and nicely presented and the message given is clear that fits for the given title.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
This is a very special writing about the God, the Holy Spirit.
It speaks of personal experience and being inspired with Biblical lines.
I Pray to these three everyday of my life, God, the Father, Yahweh, God The Son, Lord JESUS and God the Holy Spirit, the Paraclete and it gives me great wisdom and blessing as I continued my journey.
Thank You for sharing this and I am so glad to have read this.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A Special Birthday Poetry with a meaningful message to oneself and I like the given message that speaks of positiveness.
The last two lines serve as a wonderful conclusion of this well written:
" Happy Birthday Patricia "
Yes.. Happy Birthday To You.
God 🙏 Bless 🙏 You today and for Always.
Good Afternoon,
Nice title that brings sunshine to one's heart and life :
"Love's Flower's For Us All "
The written lines that completed this work of art gives joy to the heart that makes every existence worth living.
Marvelous all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for another worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A deeply emotional piece. The pain of betrayal makes the heart and soul weeps.
This is a well written poetry with a nice rhythm and rhyme whose lines remind me of the lyrics of a sad song " All alone am I ever since your goodbye, All alone with just the beat of my heart"
The story behind the poetry is truly sad.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The great question at the time the COVID horrified and terrified the whole world and that makes the given title very interesting :
" What To Do This Time Of Year ? "
The written lines served as the best suggestions to make time worthwhile inspite of everything.
I agree with the last two lines that make a wise and nice conclusion.
The poem is well written all the way with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless !
Good Morning,
A very nice poem with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme before the word search.
I love it.
Here are the words that makes the night
" Nighty Night "
Fascinating word search that makes me wish to say" Good Night "
Thank You for sharing this and the joy it brings as I read this.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Morning,
A beautiful morning and here comes a very nice poem as a form of an observation of what's going on in that particular morning and the mind wanders and wonders as the questions going on.
The last stanza serves as the answers to the questions in a most positive way.
Very inspiring.
This is nicely written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Yes. Truly " Trick Of The Mind " as the given title fits for the written or chosen lines in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The idea of saving the fly, then after saving it, realizing that this is a pesky fly, killed it instantly "
Yes..the story is believable.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a nice title expressing great expectations : " Joyous Adventure "
A poem that speaks of relationship with The Most High as you continue the journey.
" Each and every day better than last "
My favorite line.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A horrible , terrible happening that cost so many lives and the plans for tomorrow.
A writing that expresses a country in a great turmoil and the people are the sacrificed victims.
This is how I understand this
" Farewell To Arms "
Write on .
Good Morning,
Truly a Feast. Reading this delicious array of food makes me hungry.
The last three lines are truthful, thoughtful and wonderful, as in
I agree.
Nice presentation as in it looks like a buffet table so inviting and this is well written all the way.
Thank You for sharing:
" Feast Of Thanksgiving "
Write on.
Good Morning,
Interesting title of a very interesting story with a good flow.
" Love Your Neighbors "
Amusing and truthful that makes me believe more of what I learned that says :
" You can choose whom you wish to be your friends but you cannot choose your neighbors "
I laughed with Michelle in this story especially about the weird characters of Sherry and Walt.
I admire the presentation of this well written story.
Great talent and this is one of the stories that I enjoy reading in this Awesome Community and the laughters I gain is precious.
A story that is truly unforgettable.
I have nothing to correct and nothing to add. I believe that this is wonderfully written as it is.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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