Good Afternoon,
The given title is interesting and captivating and a declaration of an innermost feeling
"I Must Be Home "
Home is where your heart is and the longing is very clear here through poetic words and lines that are well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A writing that makes me smile because I love cats too
Max ..nice name for a cat.
This is well written and nicely presented and it speaks of your car Max with all your love and care
The last line makes this writing
Awesome to me.
As in perfectly Said.
Write on..
Good Afternoon,
Fascinating ABCEDARIAN Form of Poetry about Motherhood.
A wonderful description of what a Mother is through admirable poetic words and lines that completed this very meaningful and inspiring work of art.
Highly impressive..
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Tanka Form of Poetry.
The individual connectedness the universe to your wholebeing.
Nice and wise description of existence.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Admirable poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A HAIKU Poetry with an interesting title " Harukaze "
I am not familiar with the word but reading between the three lines that completed this work of art, I believe that this is joyful and wonderful poem that is concise, wise and nice.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that speaks of the realities on life and that includes " Struggle" or " Struggle "
When this happens one has to pray for strength to overcome all of this and that one has to believe in Oneself that you can see it through with the strength of the spirit and a positive mind.
The poem is written from the heart and with all sincereness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Winning Piece..
Congratulations...
Well Deserving.
The given title makes me very curious to know what is this all about.
This is a very meaningful poetry that speaks of life's experiences with a positive note as a twist and turn at the last part of this precious work of art
Inspiring and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
I am so glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting question.
Interesting title.
Interesting poetry.
Interesting work art.
The last line is my favorite line and most interesting and Awesome description of who you are.
I love this poem and I enjoy reading this all the way..
I wish to answer this question :
" Who are you ? "
I am Naomi, and to know me, is to love me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Good Afternoon,,
A well written biographical Essay proves change is a part of life, an Essay saying that you are a part of the universe and is flexible when called for the changing situation.
Pray for strength and perseverance and always believe in your heart that all is well and all will be well. Life is a process, consider everything as a Blessing.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented
" My Place "
Thank You for the read too and for making me share my innermost thoughts about Change.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Good Morning,
A loving tribute to a truly Great
Man .
The first paragraph makes a wise and nice opening of an Essay that is well written and nicely presented.
I am happy for the whole family who lives harmoniously with integrity lead by your parents love and positive example of living life with meaning and fulfillment.
I wish your Dad reads this Essay that proves to the whole world how greatly blessed all of you to have each other.
Highly admirable piece with an Awesome lines that completed this
wonderful Essay.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
There is an ongoing problem that needs to be solved and the last line makes a positive conclusion.
Another well written and nicely presented free verse poetry by one of my favorite Poet's in this Awesome Community.
The message is Philosophical and the poem is nicely presented and nicely written too
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Hahahaha
Amusing story..
All for the love of chocolate and " The Innocent Thief "
had to lie.
This is well written and nicely presented and I enjoy reading this short story about Soniya.
Lovely Name.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Your loving and very kind heart is being shown or expressed in this meaningful and well written free verse Poetry.
Admirable lines explaining clearly on how you treasure this sweet dog in your life and taking good care of her at her old age.
The nice picture of a dog adds more meaning into " My Golden Life "
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Good Morning,
The given title is wonderful and awesome to note :
" Most Grateful Son "
His parents give him love and a good example and in return he is following his footsteps to be very caring to his mother as his father is already in heaven.
You make the world so proud of you and happy for you to turn out that way.
Precious Poetry.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A new place. A new beginning.
A bit uncomfortable of the new surroundings but as long as you are with someone that you love and who loves you in return...is what matters most.
That is how I understand this well written and nicely presented work of art with a good flow.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Thank You for this wonderful and great information that surely serves its purpose for all writer's who are interested to join in this prestigious activity or contest and to win a prize or prizes .
I hope I can join before the deadline.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
God 🙏 Bless !
Good Evening,
A deeply emotional piece that speaks of a sad experience and the broken promise that makes you believe that there's no forever.
He is not deserving to be your forever. Someday surely the true forever will come your way and stay forever with the true love that he will offer making you happy forever.
The poem is well written and nicely presented and written with a broken heart.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Surely your little brother idolizes you as he is following your footsteps.
A poem so full of deep concern and care for your brother.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Very touching too.
The last line makes a truthful submission.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A great expectation of being Welcome is the main message of this very meaningful work of art written in ten lines.
I enjoy reading this all the way .
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
" Welcome Home "
Thank You for another worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Nice poem.
Nice presentation.
Nice poetic words and lines that completed this work of art with a good flow.
Nice rhythm and rhyme.
Nice good to be shared by the people close to the heart on
Thanksgiving Day .
Everything is Nice in this highly impressive
" Hot and Spicy "
Thank You for the nice read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very meaningful and inspiring work of art that speaks of how great is the love and care if a mother to her child.
A love that grows forever no matter what the age of her child.
Admirable lines completed this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for the Awesome Read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a title that speaks of the Windows of the Soul :
" Those Eyes "
The picture adds more meaning into this special work of art.
The poem expresses how those eyes penetrates to your very own eyes as you both looked at each other.
Highly impressive Poetry.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Wonderful Rhythm and Rhyme in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The story behind the poetry speaks of a nutritious, delicious and healthy ingredients added in a mustard.
Yes..I believe I'm the medical ingredients of tumerick.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
WOW..
This is lovely and lively all the way
This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
It sounds like a song from the heart with all honesty and sincerity.
Admirable lines that completed this work of art.
I enjoy reading this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Hahahaha
Yes..I follow your instructions..
I never feed chocolates to our cats and the dog as I want them all for myself. That's how I love chocolates which is the great title of this wonderful work of art.
Amusing.. Fascinating..
Amazing..
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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