Good Morning,
Live, love and be happy.
But living without love, what is the use of living after all ?
This I believe is the important message of this poetry straight from the heart.
Well...it makes sense to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Interesting title of a nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry:
" Boogie Knight "
Boogie, a dance that my three older sisters gracefully can do it with their dancing partners and the crowd applauded including myself because I am an onlooker because dancing is not my thing ..haha
The story behind the poetry is fascinating, full of challenge yet the boogie Knight gains a very meaningful life as he keeps on dancing with the boogie tune.
Entertaining work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very interesting story about a
" Happy Birthday "
At nine years old, I can see a great celebration already and the heartfelt greetings from the people close to your heart.
Fascinating and truly unforgettable Birthday Celebration .
Happy Birthday !
Write on.
Good Morning,
A short story that.makes me reflect how fast time flies.
Annie as she lost her husband years ago is full of longings yet the presence of her daughter and grandchildren inspires her existence inspite of the fact the " The Hourglass " says it's almost time and life will be over.
Well written.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very nice title of a free verse poetry with a good flow:
" Always "
A poem of continuity of the good things that the Most High keeps on blessing His people.
Wonderful message in this well written and nicely presented work of art as in very inspiring
all the way.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nicely written poetry that is descriptive of the given title :
" First Snow "
Along with the description are also wishes that has something to do with the present weather condition due to its changing season.
Thank You for the read.
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Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that gives importance to a particular queen .
Reading between the lines, the story behind the poetry speaks of a queen that was courageous and unkind.
This is a narrative of one of her men.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A great discovery.
To those who believe in reincarnation, possibly Ben is the reincarnation of Colonel Benjamin Sikes, basing on his name, his birthday and some important features that the two has a clear connectedness.
Well...the story proves that life is truly a mystery .
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning,
A very interesting title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry :
" Technology "
A poem that speaks of the many questions seeking for many answers too.
A poem that expresses the poet's awareness of what is going on with the world.
For me, one thing is sure :
Technology changes a lot of things.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Another well written and nicely presented work of art that speaks of the great faith in your heart.
Interesting title :
" Shall Obey "
The written lines fit for the given title .
The lines at the last stanza are most meaningful to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Tanka Poetry.
The picture adds more meaning into this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Living near the sea I understand each written line that describes the situation or the condition of nature about the sea.
Nice camera capture too.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh...The suspense...
This can be a wonderful preface of a very interesting novel or a book in progress.
The storyline is unique and allows your readers curiosity on what happens next.
A possible Bestseller...
Good Morning,
A short story about her and the change of weather in summertime.
Rain during summertime is truly needed to feel a cold breeze after the heat that keeps us perspiring as humidity is high on summer.
I agree with the given title.
My suggestion in this writing :
You may divide this into three paragraphs for a nicer presentation.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A short story that is mysterious in its own unique way.
Maybe Jack is sick with dementia or amnesia that he forgets her name.
The twist and turn expresses that his memory is back remembering her name.
Yes.. I agree with the given title
" Poor Jack "
Write on.
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt.
The given title expresses uneasiness
" Social Anxiety "
The suffocating environment that gives an unpleasant feeling is the main message of this well written and nicely presented work of art in a philosophical way.
Thank You for the read.
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Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that shares a great story of a very important person ...a true Hero who served the Motherland.
This serves as a wonderful Legacy to his children and to the next generation and the next in lineage to his family.
The poem is well written and nicely presented with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
Unforgettable....
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very inspiring poetry that shows great comfort as I read the given title :
" In Your Arms "
Reading between the lines gives the feeling of Security and Love that assures the heart as being wrapped around by the loving arms.
A poem so full of love.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a very interesting and captivating title
" Anger Hurts The Soul "
The written lines fit for the given title.
Yes ! I agree with the given title and I believe firmly that the one who angers you ,
Conquers You.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Surely this Apple pie serves as
" The Best Dessert
Ever"
I can vividly picture
as everyone gathers at the dining table enjoying bite after bite and slice after slice of this delicious and nutritious pie .
I wish to have a slice or two .
Thank You for sharing this Awesome work of art .
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Good Morning,
Sounds like a Country Song to me.
The given title is a form of a celebration that gives joy all around:
"The Gathering "
Surely a wonderful song that gives a positive vibration to everyone attending.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Afternoon,
A very important place in the country of the
United States Of America, " New York "..
Wonderful and admirable lines that completed this work of art.
Actually, when our daughter, Atty. Cathy went to America as one of the Conference Speaker of the United Nations , the first place she visited was the Library of New York and she was so proud showing her picture to us her parents, when she came home.
That for me is truly a very important place in your country.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented poetry.
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Good Afternoon,
I agree with the last paragraph that serves as a conclusion of this meaningful Prose with an interesting title
" Longing "
For me it is better to have love and lost than not to have love at all.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
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Good Morning,
A wonderful experience is being shared here through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a fascinating title:
" The Wildflower Field "
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture a big, wide field full of wildflowers blooming to its joyful glory and the sight is marvelous that keeps on lingering in one's memory.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Afternoon,
A very touching and well written free verse poetry with a very meaningful title :
" A Son's Prayer "
This serves as a loving tribute to a dearest mother who's gone too soon.
A poem expressing the grieving heart of a son.
As The Most High has our dearest ones in His Keeping, we also keep them in our hearts forever.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
WOW !
An Awesome Essay or Prose to me. It speaks of life and all its essence and is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Meaningful, inspiring, thoughtful, truthful and each line speaks of real facts as we continue the journey called life.
Marvelous...
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
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