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Review of Dog Walk  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A walk with the dog and something unpleasant happened. A blessing jn disguise probably as it makes the husband more attentive to your needs.
Hahaha
There is a good reason for everything.
A nice bonding time yet.. sad to note that this happened.
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
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Review of Lion I AM  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The short poem is well written and nicely presented.
It expresses a philosophical messsge about the personality of a lion, a fighter, strong and powerful.
As the lion roars the land stays silent observing such movements of strength and style.
Thank You for sharing
Lion I Am
Write on.
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Review of Doubting Thomas  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A Saraband form of poetry
A new form that I learned today.
Thank You for the Specisl Note below the poem that explains clearly making your readers admire more of your work of art.
YES.. I agree with the given title
Doubting Thomas wherein it fits for the written lines..

The poem has a nice rhythm and rhyme.
" We'll face tomorrow ' cause
we must "
A firm and wise conclusion.
A highly impressive poetry.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Wonderful
Diary Of An 18 Month Old Boy
This is a great documentary that you love to keep and read it again to your children in the future.
A diary so full of love and care and much sacrifices of a mother to show her great love for her child.
I smile reading the last line.
Great !
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented Poetry that expresses the life of a soldier or Soldiers who served the
Motherland..
The heroes who savrificed their lives for the best if reason.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A four line poetry that is descriptive in the most philosophical way about the sea.
Intriguing lines that completed this work of art.
Sad and Scary too.
" For she gives equality to all that rots "
This line truly proves of
The Indifferent Sea
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I enjoy reading the Story behind the poetry.
The bad stepmother did not win and the story has a very happy ending.
Written for a prompt.
Very nice poem and very nice story too.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
A Little Girl's Dream
Write on.
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Review of Lost  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening

A deeply emotional piece as the given title expresses it in its own.
It speaks of a relationship and being explained through poetic way in a philosophical manner
The last line
"We can't be together "
Makes the right conclusion for being
Lost...
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,.
Interesting title
Remember To Recite
Yes..this is a nice poem to recite
Nice lines that completed this work of art.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful
The poem is like a reminder to the boy and it is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Boys will be Boys  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
YES..
You are a lucky momma.
Truly Blessed.
Noah and Christian...two brothers who love each other
Reading between the lines makes me smile and so happy for You.
Interesting title that speaks of the truth
Boys Will Be Boys
Thank You for the worthwhile read
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Review of The Sort  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A very challenging job to hire the best qualified candidate for a particular position and to screen all applicsnts and decide whom to be hired.
Aa in like a Personnel Department and the best of the best will be hired to do such job descriptions and with that salaries and wages also with some fringe benefits be discussed once being hired .
Interesting job indeed.
Thank You for sharing
The Sort
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon
A short story that is well written and nicely presented and ut is about tax evation or tax evader and actually there are many of them.
Hopefully this time he pays his taxes willingly.
Thank You for sharing
The Great Tax Fraud
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Very nice painting.
An admirable work of srt.
It looks so real as in so full of life.
So beautiful as it is. Wonderful work of art.
Thank You for sharing this lovely painting of
Two Men In The Canoe
I am so glad to have seen thie.
Hoghly impressive.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A free verse Biographical poetry that expresses the life of a Sailor.
Thank You for serving the Motherland.
You are one of those who sacrificed a lot for your country and for your people.
Truly A A hero.
I Sakute You.
The Poem is a true dedication , Sacred and Divine
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The early morning activity , from the Time you wake up to the time going out of the house..All set to go.. with commfortable shoes and all of those things needed..
The last few lines explained well the day's journey
Thank You for sharing
My Shoes And My Accelerator
Write on.
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Review of Carolina's Curls  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Brilliant way to beat Cancer.
Admirable, Courageous Carolina.
Nice story.
Very inspiring.
It is well written and nicely presented.
The positive outlook of Carolina makes life worth living inspite of everything.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
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Review of Early Morning  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Yes. Early Morning..
And the sun rises up and the birds are chirping ..the cascading waves of the sea, the flowers blooming.. makes me find time to smell them.. as the day begins.
Early Morning
A great title of a poem that also means today, possibilities are endless.
Thank You for sharing a poem that also activates my mind
Write on.
God Bless
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Review of Know yourself  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A well written
Essay that derived from an observation of an epigraph at an ancient Greek Museum
Know Yourself
You did explain it well.
Reading the conclusion with a question
" Is that what it meant ?"
In my own honest opinion, this is all I could say:
The more you know yourself, the more you love yourself ..
Thank You for the read.
Write on
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Review of roses  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening
Roses....
Nice and beautiful title of a poem.
A very beautiful flower too.
Rosa Mystica, Yes..very true..
The queen of flowers.
I admire all the lines that completed this work of art.
Precious Roses
Always will be
Thank You for sharing.

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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The latest news about this modern world in this modern technology about the people who actually played an important role in this latest development .
This is informative as well as interesting in its own special way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review of Seabreeze  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon
WOW as in
WOW..

Seabreeze.. nice as it is
As I live near the sea
And seabreeze surrounds me, embrace me
everyday .
The poem is lovely all the way
It is so full of life
So full of beauty as
Nothing compares with the beauty of the Sea
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on
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Review of Mango  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Very nice picture of Mango.
Very nice name too which is the name of my favorite delicious and nutritious fruit
Mango
I wish to call her Wanwan
Shortcut for Bulawan
Our dialect for GOLD
Adorable MANGO
Lovable too
Meouw
Thank You for sharing.
Great..
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Review of Rabbits  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Rabbits
They are prolific..
They love to eat green leaves.
The given title fits for the chosen or written six lines .
This is well written and nicely presented all the eay
They eat, they breed,
They die
Perfectly said
Thank You for sharing
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
I love the given title.
It expresses positiveness.
To Rise From A Storm
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
It expresses a philosophical message in a nice and wonderful way.
This is highly Admirable and truly impressive.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A three line
Haiku poetry
Concise, Nice and wise..
Actually, reading the title makes me ask in whisper,
Peter Who ?
Then reading the last line, my question was being answered.
Hahaha
Thank You for sharing
The Arrival Of Peter
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Write on.
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