Good Morning,
Written for a prompt.
Nice title " Ribbon "
Nice poem too.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful and each line described about the given title in a very admirable way.
I enjoy reading each line that fits for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on .
Good Morning,
A captivating title
" A Short Question "
Reading between the lines makes me realize that I myself has so many questions about life and all it's essence
...but in order not to worry I just let the ebb and flow happens and Smile as well as praying for the gift of Acceptance so I won't question anymore .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on .
Good Morning,
Yes ...
Dominik gives a wise advice to Calvin. In this present generation it's easy to call and to locate a person or a place.
I am glad that eventually Calvin was able to deliver the item in his first day of his job .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented Love Poetry with a very meaningful and inspiring title :
"You Are Mine And
I Am Yours "
As in two hearts beat as one.
A true love being expressed through poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry and the narrator here is the Genie .
The poem has a good flow and the rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Reading the first two lines I wish to say.. that I myself wish to set you free.
Thank You for sharing
" Genie In The Lamp "
Write on.
Good Morning,
The Covid 19 personal experience. You are so blessed to have a very strong immune system.
I am happy for you.
Reading between the lines brings back those unpleasant memories that my family and me experienced at the pandemic and my deepest prayer that it never ever come again.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme all the way.
Wonderful Poetry too that is descriptive of this Awesome Community popularly known as Writing. Com.
It is my great honor to be here and I enjoy as well as I love my stay.
Thank You for sharing this beautiful work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
A loving tribute to Pumpkin, a dearest cat whose gone too soon.
A poem that expresses your kind , caring and loving heart .
Cats are my favorite pets too. They are wise and very clean as they clean themselves everyday. We have five and they recognize their names as I call them one by one as I give them food .
Thank You for sharing
" Midnight Prayers "
God 🙏 Bless You
Always.
Good Evening,
WOW... Brilliant Writer.
Short stories with the same title and different theme.
Each one is admirable and highly impressive and is well written and nicely presented all the way .
I enjoy reading this
" The Flying Roses "
I am so glad to have read this.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry with a captivating title
" Tomorrow We Will
Rise Early "
A work of art with great expectations and anticipation for some things to be done tomorrow.
The first two lines are my favorite lines.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I lost a dearest brother too due to cardiac arrest and I can feel the pain and sorrow reading between the lines with tears freely flowing because the truth is I miss him more than words can say and my life is not the same since he was gone.
Yes.. God 🙏 has keep them into His keeping as we keep them into our hearts.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A poem that gives a special attention to this particular lady as well as this particular dress from the Goodwill Store
"She only wore that ugly dress to be equal "
This line is a very intriguing line why it's being called ugly...
Well as long as it is clean, then it's not ugly at all
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Captivating title that is also inspiring . It speaks of positive and powerful statements in a brilliant poetic way :
" Poetic Affirmations "
The wonderful lines expresses many aspects of our existence and help us to create a picture of what we want to become .
It makes us to be ready in accepting joy into our lives .
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very inspiring biographical story.
An accident that gives so much problem to your very own individuality.
The Healing...
Miraculous as God works in wonders.
A short story that proves JESUS as the great physician.
Touching and enlightening.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful Prose that is nicely written and nicely presented all the way.
It is deeply emotional and creates sadness and sorrow with a twist and turn at the conclusion.
Yes..even in the darkest hour of our existence there is always Hope that tomorrow the sun will shine again.
Thank You for the inspiring read
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful poetry about Tom, the old turkey.
Yes..very true, sadness fills the heart when all the friends are gone, and now you are the only one, old and wrinkled and forgetful..yet, Tom's lucky to survive each Thanksgiving...
Oh..what a life...
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh... what a drink..to make him sink...
The given title is interesting and intriguing :
" Guzzling "
The poem has a good flow and with a wonderful rhythm be and rhyme.
Surely he gained a good sleep yet the upset stomach later on as a bad effect.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
Hahaha
I love this amusing
Poetry about Jeans with holes.
Oh...they say it's fashion but no way that I wear those with holes
.
I enjoy looking at people wearing them but not for me.
I admire the creativeness of this well written work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I admire the storyline behind the portry, searching for an inspiration.
Here comes Leora giving an advice.
Wonderful conclusion.
My minimal suggestion in this writing :
" It's just isn't fare'
Please change the word
fare to : fair
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is very touching.
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that expresses the deepest feelings of your heart.
It speaks of your caring heart and soul.
The given title offers hope
" I Hope You Get
Better "
A poetry that serves as a great letter to a dearest friend.
Yes.. I also hope so .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented work of art. The given title is captivating and interesting:
" The Road Of Time "
The poem has a good flow and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The lines at the second stanza are intriguing .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
An unusual shape of a plant. A shape of a hand that includes the wrist.
Amazing as it's complete with five fingers and nails.
An illustration to a poem with a title
" Spring "
Thank You for sharing this very unique and lovely plant and the opportunity for me to look at it.
God 🙏 Bless..
Good Morning,
A Halloween Activity nicely expressed through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry .
The poem has a good flow and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Wonderful as it is.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very special and important topic that you are sharing here and the given title is precious by itself ;
" Heartfelt Wedding
Gifts Turned
Heirloom "
You have nice list here and with a clear explanation in each one.
Perfectly said.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read .
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very meaningful poetry with an interesting title:
" Sorry "
An apology addressed to someone special that expresses deeply the true intentions.
Yet, when Sorry is not enough, then positive action is needed or added into it to heal the deepest wounds.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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