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Review of Paraguay Rocks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Paraguay Rocks

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem with a first letter acrostic of Paraguay Rocks.

POETRY INFORMATION:

It is a simple acrostic.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Provide more poems like this.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Questions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Questions

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The author attempts to have plans to meet his/her needs. The problem is the plans never quite meet the needs. Xxx

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Continue to modify your plans until you find what works for you.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of If Wishes Were Horses

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Two stanzas with direction for poets wether it be horses or fishes.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Two four line verses with rhyming scheme of A A B B.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Keep me happy. Write some more enjoyable poetry.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Bad Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Bad Poetry

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Short poetic quip about the birthday of the author.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Three verses of four lines. The rhyming scheme is A B C B.

ou{rc:green}SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I guess many people have the same number sequence.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Luck  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of LUCK

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Everyone needs luck. There is never enough luck.

POETRY INFORMATION:

The poem is completely in free verse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

May you have all the luck you need.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Meditation on Faith

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I didn not find that this poem had much meditation at all let alone looking particularly at faith.
It seemed more like a trip into outer space than anything to do with faith.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Four verses all in free verse and not really feeling the essence of poetry.
I guess I am just a little too much being part of old school thinking. Meditation should be a quiet reflective experience.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

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dblameck
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Review of The Horn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of The Horn

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

It seems a simple little story. The old Grandfather gives the young boy an old horn telling him it scares fairies. All the boy sees is that it scares the cat and she runs away when he blows it. The final paragraph shows us that the horn truly scares the fairie.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A good story with a tremendous ending.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Just a Little Stuck

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short little episode about the dog named June getting entangled with the hammock on the back deck. The alternate storyline deals with the need for a caffeine fix in the morning.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

The confusion about the screaming made it harder for me to grasp the problem initially. Do dogs actually scream? Question side naps my mind.

FINAL THOUGHTS

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)



Review of Last Words (the abyss)

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Last words are always important and significant. They can be full of sadness and grief or be composed with singing and dancing and thereby be joyous and happy. It is perhaps important to have both in their own time.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Three verses of free verse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Well prepared and touching. It could share more of the different types of last words.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Another Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Another Night

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

There is a sense of boredom and unfulfillment in this short essay. This woman has not found a true relationship and seems to be seeking but as yet has not found what she is seeking.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Develop a plan for the future. with some definite plans.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Details  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



Review of Details

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

We live our lives in a world with so many questions. The author of this essay has so many questions. There is a multitude of things in the gospels that require our searching in order to get the truths that God has prepared for our examination. Besides, there are many physical aspects that we need to research in order to have a better understanding of our world. In these days it is more important to grasp our aspect of nature.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Global warming and so many issues need our attention.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of A Strange Night [/b]
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First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short story almost out of the twilight zone.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Expectations that something sinister will happen seem to fill my mind. I was expecting something more sinister.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of The Smell of Childhood

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

is interesting that I have chosen to review this poem on mother s day. The last line of this poem is the real message. It is the smell of home and love.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Seven lines of free verse which depicts the childhood love of nature.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I like it the way it is written.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Freedom

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem about knowing true freedom. It is based in never saying no, never giving up hope.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Nineteen lines of freee verse poetry.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

The conclusion that freedom is available.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Meditation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Mediation

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Laying back with the mind looking at quiet but lovely moments. Seeking the peace and quiet of one's memories and thoughts.

POETRY INFORMATION:

There are six verses. The first five have 3 lines and the last has four lines.
All use rhyming scheme of A B A.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A pleasant poem with a positive attitude.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Paying the Bills  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)



Review of Paying the Bills

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A plaintive voice calling out from the crowd but there is no answer. But no one bothers to respond.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Completely free verse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

The ignoring of the patients except for their basic medical needs seems cruel but it is the truth in most seniors
homes.


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Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of The Next Best Thing

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The husband gives his wife a stuffed squirrel representing a figure from a TV show. She doesn't like it but finds out later it is valuable.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

interesting but I failed to see the point.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Into the Nature  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Into the Nature

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

An understanding where the poet is not only concerned by nature but is actually involved by nature.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Ten lines all starting with the word I Entire poem is free verse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I like it the way it is written.

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Review of Sam Platte  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of Sam Platt

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Some cowboys chatting about the dangers of their present location.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The plot is about the speed of one of the cowboys and then expands to the dangers of indian tribes and which were following them.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

It seems that danger is iminate. Need more of the story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Review of The New Grinch  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of The New Grinch

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem about Christmas with all the fables and tall tales being dismissed as lies.

POETRY INFORMATION:

free verse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Don't read to children.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



Review of The World Moves on with Laughter

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem which is really a song about life, family and its changes.

POETRY INFORMATION:

The refrain is:

The fallen stay
while the world moves on with laughter.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Each verse is an advance to the floral aspect of continuing family life.

FINAL THOUGHTS:
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of The Root of the Problem

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewern it.. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Alex liberates one of Mrs. Jenkin's pies from her back porch where it is cooling. He of course has to return it.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A well told story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Shaman's Trance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Shaman's Trance

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Trance like meditation can be direct and very meaningful. This small listing of thots direct us to seek direction and force.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Expand your vision and thinking. I want to read more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Memorial for those


Review of Dawn Rises Over Battlefields

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

April 25th is the Anzac day of Memorial and Remembrance for those fallen in both wars.

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Review of The Joke's on Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of The Joke's on Me

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A simple story poem with a humorous ending.

POETRY INFORMATION:

There are five verses each of which has four lines. Each of the verse's rhyming schemes is A B C B.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A story of everyday life that makes you smile.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

It brought a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing this item!

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