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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of There No Smoke Without Fire

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem about friendships. It insists that there is nothing more to the relationship. It is purely friends.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Two verses of four lines each. Rhyming scheme of A A B B on each verse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I think it is perfect just the way it is written.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!

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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of What we do as Mom Sleeps

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Mom is home from work and she needs a nap. As she sleeps the children redo the backyard with a treehouse and extensive changes.

POETRY INFORMATION:

There are seven verses each with four lines and a rhyming scheme of A B A B.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I like it the way it is. Particularly the lines about fritters and bear claws to refresh the workers.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Plains Twilight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)



Review of Plains Twilight

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short poem hi-lighting nature at sunset.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Written in free verse with many descriptive words.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:


i enjoyed this poem but would suggest more information on how the light reflects on the animals and life of the area.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Enjoyable. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)



Review of Luna s Rival Part 1

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A competition between two women in a swimming contest where one creates a wardrobe malfunction for some reason that I could not figure out.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I am unsure of the ultimate plot I note this portion of the text "The vulnerability, the helplessness, and the fact that she controlled my fate as a grin came across her face."

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I guess I need part 2

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of Jason and the Soccer Mum

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

This is truly a Mother and son argument overactivity in sports. Both sides lash out with threats pointedly striking to hurt the feelings of the other. The heated conversation is angry but does come to a solution amiable to both.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Each side has its own reasons for not wanting to give in during this argument. Both mother and son have some particular ideas to change the athletic activities of the family.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Neither side initially wants to concede to the other but does want a resolution. You might try some other conflict resolution methods.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Trials of the Romantic Period

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A simple word search of nine words that is fairly easy to complete.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

All words deal with romantic poetry.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Try it and enjoy.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!


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Review of Homecoming  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Homecoming

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Those who have pets know this experience. The greeting yet a possessive questioning as to why one has been away.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Free verse with the words in italics being the pet's response.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

This poem brought a smile to my face. You should write more things of this type.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: ASR | (3.5)



Review of Christmas Solitare

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I was looking at your portfolio and saw this piece had new been rated. So I decided to do a review.
I found it to be an interesting reflective story being with the choosing to make a drastic change at Christmas.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I am unsure how the two different women playing solitaire relate to the decision to go to Hawaii.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of And Then There Was None

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Should I laugh or cry after reading this story. It is such a microcosm of these mixers.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

You are limited because of word count so more short stories about society today.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

I enjoyed this glimpse of life today.
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Review of ODE TO COFFEE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Ode to Coffee

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Very impressive. Good poetic motion.

POETRY INFORMATION:


A true ode of fourteen lines and the correct rhyming scheme.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Good impressions of the need for that life giving black liquid.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (3.0)



Review of My Trip To Cancun

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

First section of a vacation story to Cancun Mexico.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Details of trip to Cancun including description of the excessive heat.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Give up more detail. Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Tooth Dilemma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Tooth Dilemma

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A child's delightful expressions and questions when he/she loses a tooth.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Fhree varied rhyming verses.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I thoroughly enjoyed the playfulness of this poem.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (5.0)




Review of A Shamrock a Day

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A young Irish girl teased about her elfin pointed ears. The mother explains the benefits.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The answers the mother gives are more than satisfying.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

keep writing.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)




Review of Do-nut Go Breaking My Heart

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A couple in argument over the selection of donuts for their son s birthday.
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PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Unnamed couple argue over which is best at selecting doughnuts.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I really enjoy the back and forth between the couple.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



Review of Death in a Metro Bar

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

An unusual poem with three verses of ten lines with only lines six and seven rhyming.


PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It relates a story of a man bringing guns, a sword and kerosene to a bar and starting a murderous spree.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Starlight Parlor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Write more. This is a great poem. I want to read more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

This was a pleasant read.

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Review of After midnight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)



Review of The Tourists

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

What starts out to be a friendly positive community story about building statues in the park and turns into an evil scary story involving killed pets, scared children and eventually the death of a young girl.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Read this story. I am sure you will be enthralled by it.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of The Price of Fame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of The Price of Fame

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Three interesting Limerick poems with very different people and with different locations.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Standard limerick rhyming scheme of A A B B A.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!.

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Review of The Doorman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



Review of The Doorman

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A delightful limerick about a doorman to a club.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Rhyming scheme was A A B B A.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

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Review of Fibonacci Spring  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Fibonacci Spring

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Fibonacci poems create a design. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

The poem expresses the beauty of spring time.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Crystal's Charms  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



Review of Crystal"s Charms

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

This short story is a great image filled with descriptions of the dangers and evil of this drug. It tells the story of a young woman with great potential and plans who starts to use this drug and then goes on to detail the drastic changes in this young woman. The detail of the changes is frightening.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Should be read by anyone considering to use or flirt with using this drug.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Sea Stories  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Sea Stories

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A flash fiction story of a new sailor having to perform a task which she assumes is another of the pranks that new sailors are asked to perform to express their unfamiliarity with nautical matters. Whether it be a left-handed spanner or a gallon of checkered paint. Picking up mail from a buoy actually was done in the era of clipper ships.

GENERAL INFORMATION:

A good story with nautical overtones. I enjoyed adding the dolphin into the story.
The feeling of seasickness was brought to mind with rolling and pitching of the seaboat.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Fair Weather Friends

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The thoughts behind the words are very true and personal to me. How my friends support me is even more important in the difficult days I am currently dealing with.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Three verses made up of pairs of rhyming couplets.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I think the message is clear and I hope people take note.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Ocean Magic

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A beautiful poem that champions the joys of putting your toes in the pounding surf.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I envision walking barefoot at the rolling edge of warm water as it foams between my toes.
I really enjoyed your poem.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Great poem. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review of FlashBacks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)


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Anniversary Review of flashbacks

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem about remembrances. Noting how things tend to change.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A poetic review of the past

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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