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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Revisiting Lines: 7

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Mother's Day is days away. Poem is based on Mother's love.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Eintou 2-4-6-8-6-4-2

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Effort to create this type of poetry is maximum.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


Thanks for sharing this delightful poem!

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



Review of The World Moves on with Laughter

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem which is really a song about life, family and its changes.

POETRY INFORMATION:

The refrain is:

The fallen stay
while the world moves on with laughter.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Each verse is an advance to the floral aspect of continuing family life.

FINAL THOUGHTS:
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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of The Root of the Problem

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewern it.. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Alex liberates one of Mrs. Jenkin's pies from her back porch where it is cooling. He of course has to return it.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A well told story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Shaman's Trance  
Review by dblameck (David)
Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Shaman's Trance

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Trance like meditation can be direct and very meaningful. This small listing of thots direct us to seek direction and force.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Expand your vision and thinking. I want to read more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Memorial for those


Review of Dawn Rises Over Battlefields

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

April 25th is the Anzac day of Memorial and Remembrance for those fallen in both wars.

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Review of The Joke's on Me  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of The Joke's on Me

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A simple story poem with a humorous ending.

POETRY INFORMATION:

There are five verses each of which has four lines. Each of the verse's rhyming schemes is A B C B.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A story of everyday life that makes you smile.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

It brought a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of There No Smoke Without Fire

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem about friendships. It insists that there is nothing more to the relationship. It is purely friends.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Two verses of four lines each. Rhyming scheme of A A B B on each verse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I think it is perfect just the way it is written.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of What we do as Mom Sleeps

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Mom is home from work and she needs a nap. As she sleeps the children redo the backyard with a treehouse and extensive changes.

POETRY INFORMATION:

There are seven verses each with four lines and a rhyming scheme of A B A B.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I like it the way it is. Particularly the lines about fritters and bear claws to refresh the workers.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Plains Twilight  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)



Review of Plains Twilight

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short poem hi-lighting nature at sunset.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Written in free verse with many descriptive words.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:


i enjoyed this poem but would suggest more information on how the light reflects on the animals and life of the area.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Enjoyable. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of Jason and the Soccer Mum

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

This is truly a Mother and son argument overactivity in sports. Both sides lash out with threats pointedly striking to hurt the feelings of the other. The heated conversation is angry but does come to a solution amiable to both.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Each side has its own reasons for not wanting to give in during this argument. Both mother and son have some particular ideas to change the athletic activities of the family.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Neither side initially wants to concede to the other but does want a resolution. You might try some other conflict resolution methods.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!


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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Trials of the Romantic Period

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A simple word search of nine words that is fairly easy to complete.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

All words deal with romantic poetry.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Try it and enjoy.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!


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Review of Homecoming  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Homecoming

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Those who have pets know this experience. The greeting yet a possessive questioning as to why one has been away.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Free verse with the words in italics being the pet's response.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

This poem brought a smile to my face. You should write more things of this type.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!

dblameck
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Review of A Simple Love  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of A Simple Love

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short poem with a strong reflection of the strong love that is shared.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Five lines with a rhyming scheme of A B B C C.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more poetry of this calibre.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)



Review of Christmas Solitare

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I was looking at your portfolio and saw this piece had new been rated. So I decided to do a review.
I found it to be an interesting reflective story being with the choosing to make a drastic change at Christmas.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I am unsure how the two different women playing solitaire relate to the decision to go to Hawaii.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of And Then There Was None

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Should I laugh or cry after reading this story. It is such a microcosm of these mixers.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

You are limited because of word count so more short stories about society today.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

I enjoyed this glimpse of life today.
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Review of ODE TO COFFEE  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Ode to Coffee

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Very impressive. Good poetic motion.

POETRY INFORMATION:


A true ode of fourteen lines and the correct rhyming scheme.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Good impressions of the need for that life giving black liquid.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (3.0)



Review of My Trip To Cancun

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

First section of a vacation story to Cancun Mexico.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Details of trip to Cancun including description of the excessive heat.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Give up more detail. Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Tooth Dilemma  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Tooth Dilemma

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A child's delightful expressions and questions when he/she loses a tooth.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Fhree varied rhyming verses.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I thoroughly enjoyed the playfulness of this poem.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)




Review of A Shamrock a Day

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A young Irish girl teased about her elfin pointed ears. The mother explains the benefits.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The answers the mother gives are more than satisfying.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

keep writing.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)




Review of Do-nut Go Breaking My Heart

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A couple in argument over the selection of donuts for their son s birthday.
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PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Unnamed couple argue over which is best at selecting doughnuts.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I really enjoy the back and forth between the couple.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.0)




Review of Some Times You Can’t Save Them

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I guess it is how a EMT feels when he can't save one of his young passengers.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

An EMT shares a woman's sorrow at the shooting death of her son.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



Review of Death in a Metro Bar

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

An unusual poem with three verses of ten lines with only lines six and seven rhyming.


PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It relates a story of a man bringing guns, a sword and kerosene to a bar and starting a murderous spree.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of I AM OF NO USE

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem which is filled with despair.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Composed of six rhyming couplets.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I was looking for what is causing the depression.
I found it hard to follow.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review of Starlight Parlor  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Write more. This is a great poem. I want to read more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

This was a pleasant read.

Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review of After midnight  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)



Review of The Tourists

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

What starts out to be a friendly positive community story about building statues in the park and turns into an evil scary story involving killed pets, scared children and eventually the death of a young girl.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Read this story. I am sure you will be enthralled by it.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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