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Review of The New Clothes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of The New Clothes

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A flash fiction story about a woman walking under a ladder and getting red paint splattered on her. A romance ensues.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Walking under a ladder is always dangerous. Paint dropped, new clothes bought love ensues.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Mask  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Mask

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Poem about a mask. The poem is formed into a diatelle.

POETRY INFORMATION:

The Diatelle is a fun, syllable counting form like the etheree with a twist. The syllable structure of
the diatelle is as follows: 1/2/3/4/6/8/10/12/10/8/6/4/3/2/1, but unlike an ethere, has a set rhyme
pattern of abbcbccaccbcbba. This poetry form may be written on any subject matter and looks
best center aligned in a diamond shape.



FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Gone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)



Review of Gone

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Poem about a broken watch.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Free Verse.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of My Angel, My Sweetheart

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A love poem where the male is appreciative of the female.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Two four line verses are composed of two rhyming couplets.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Review of Landsgolden  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of Landsgolden

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A flash fiction story with a touch of mystery.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Jenny a first time baby sitter reads a mysterious book and disappears.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Something is missing from the story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Nightmare  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Nightmare

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Good read and development. A story told from the point of view of a horse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

It was an interesting story. Write more. :

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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of The Dress From the Goodwill Store (/b)

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A good story. very descriptive.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Five verses, Each verse with six lines with composed of three rhyming couplets.


FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of From the Ground Up

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Interesting advertisement for a poetry creation class.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I might look into taking this class.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of Attack of the Plot Bunnies

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poetic punch at the plot bunnies (those unplanned plot twists)

{c: blue}POETRY INFORMATION:

Random rhyming lines. No metre detected.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A plot map might aid the author.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Eppie  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)



Review of Eppie

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Family drama set in Jane Austen England. Compelling story of a family fighting against power to achieve respect and power.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Not noted

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of The Fall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of The Fall

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short poem where the writer links falling in love similar to falling from a height.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Five verses with a rhyming scheme of A B A B

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Romance is evident in the words but it leaves much.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Today was SH Crappy

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A young person feels depressed because he/she feels he/she is not appreciated.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The frustration felt by this person is intense and they need to look for emotional support.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Keep writing this type of expression is important.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Angel Fingers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Angel Fingers

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A good story of a not-so-pleasant situation at the end of a vacation.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

American tourists traveling in Chile and riding the subway sadly have a wallet pick pocked.
They deal with the Chilean police and the interaction seems beneficial.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

More detail of police interaction.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good Story. Thanks for sharing this item!


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Review of Money Talks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Money Talks

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A confusing story thatle is almost completely in dialogue.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Characters stand out but the plot seems less direct.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Tie this scenario into a larger story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Class School Trip  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of Class School Trip

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I feel like I've been dropped into the middle of a story.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I am not sure what is going on. I note the two characters of John and Jennifer are the centre of the action.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Fill out the story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Building Alexandria

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Rebuilding a society that has been destroyed by scavenging destroyed libraries.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The youth is leading the way.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of Bookish

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

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PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Short and simple story that is very entertaining. Great characters.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Perfect as it is.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of God loves you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Anniversary Review of God Loves You

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

J have known this since my late teens but I thank you for writing this poem to remind me.


PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Gods great plan

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Second line first verse should not it be sins touch.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of A Helping Hand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of A Helping Hand

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A journalist is doing an investigative piece. He is pretending to be homeless and trying to live on the streets of Pittsburg. It is well written and follows an easily written format.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The researcher spends his time at a homeless shelter and in the end provides a substantial i=gift to the shelter.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Fill out the story with more detail.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Review of Jesus Christ.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Jesus Christ

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I randomly selected this entry from your portfolio because I saw that you were reviewing other authors.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The plot of course is based on the Bible and there is only one character. Jesus Christ.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Of course there is no limit to what you could write but what you have done well.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Lucky Irish  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Lucky Irish

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

}OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A great Irish tale of a father taking his son for his initial trip to the local Irish pub.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

He gives his son a taste of the different typical Irish beverages. His son does not like any of the stout or any of the other Irish ales. So his father has to consume each glass. Not finished yet the man gives his son a taste of Jamieson and then a shot of Redhead. Same results. So the father has to drink the whiskey.

(c:green)Now we find out that son is in a pram and therefore a baby. Quite an Irish trick.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Just Say I Am Busy

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A very true exposition of feelings. However I also have trouble with the constant busy signal.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write More. We want to read your thoughts.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Review of Soulful Love..!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)



Review of Fate

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review is done at your request.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A description of the vision that the poet has of his/her love written in three four line verses. It moves from eyes to smile and finally to breath. The poet interchanges love and lust simply. Colour and imagery well done.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Free verse. No metre or rhyming scheme noted.

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Review of Whisked Away  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Whisked Away

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A good poem Fast moving and enjoyable. I enjoyed the colour refeences.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Four verses Each beginning with the phrase "Whisked away"

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a delightful poem. An artist's conception of life splashed with the pigments of his/her choice of hues and blended colours of her palette. I can almost see the variations of colour being applied to the canvas. It is these colours which make life a vibrant painting of our lives.

As an amateur artist I found this poem to be delightful.


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