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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting poem heralding the coming of spring. It is a celebration with four verses with an A B A B rhyming scheme. There is an interruption of two lines of rhyming couplet.

The poem is directed toward the joy of springtime. I found the poem a delight.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A short thought but it has long expressive meaning and of course has much meaning. This is known as a trueism. It is one that experienced many times in my years in the Canadian Navy.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this detailed information on the Empire States Building to be extremely interesting. The detail that the author has gone onto is next to amazing. I almost feel like I was a part of the crew that laboured to erect this work of artticuL rt.

Having been able to tour the building during my time in New York I realized that the building is more than just an office building it. It is a work of art.


The author makes that evident in the way he has crafted his writing.


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Review of Coffee Crossed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
What a great opening for a romantic love story.

It is short concise image that you might see so often on one of the openings of a romance story you might see on a television romance.
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It is just a spilt cup of "coffee or Starbucks brew that the barista poured out before this accident.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review of Travel Pictures

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I enjoyed viewing this gallery of photos. It was like a quick vacation for me.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Perhaps segment the pictures in catagories.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



Review of Example Quiz

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

It was fun to do. I wonder what i would do if I took it again.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Create more easy quizzes.

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Review of My Lai  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)



Review of My Lai

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

An interesting oversight of the massacre. As usual the problem is following orders that really have no sense in reality.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A village destroyed and the inhabitants killed because of faulty intelligence and blunt obidence of orders.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of The Antihero  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)



Review of The Antihero

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I am unsure of the background got this story. It seems to be a battle of god like characters who are fighting over the earth. The story of their confrontation ends in peace.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Ayesha is the super-heroine who takes over the earth and reigns over it for three until she is poisoned by her son.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)



Review of Memorial Day

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A college student is compelled by his parents to spend Memorial Day assisting his grandfather with some work. He does so relucantly. After working on the yard and a wheelchair ramp he finds the work is being done for an Iraq vet who is paralyzed from the waist down. This changes the young man's opinion.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of A Man From Tomorrow - Episode One

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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A long story that seems to go on with little information that to complete the story quickly. What is the information that Major Kwang wanted? Is this a story offering a spy type story?

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Major Kwang the KPLA is the prime character and the story centres around him and his activities.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Many sentences start with he. There is also limited sentence structure.
Spacing and breaking the story into paragraphs would help.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Two cats  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Two Cats

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
A general poem dealing with many aspects of summer. There is no reference to cats until the final verse.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Five four verses with no rhyming scheme.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of Messages from God to You

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A broad selection of scripture passages that the author states are words of God in making His promises to mankind.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A very complete list.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Prayer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Prayer

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short acrostic poem showing the elements of prayer

POETRY INFORMATION:

Acrostic using the word prayer. There is no rhyming scheme.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Good information.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thanks for reminding us and sharing this item!

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Review of Malice Intended  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
To me this is a strange story. It starts in the middle and works towards a conclusion which in the final moments turn into a completely different aspect.
A real surprise ending.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The plot is twisted because the person narrating the story is in fact the culprit.

The characters are just simply indentified and more detail is necessary.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Too many things going on without some clues.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Scent of a Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)



Review of Scent of a Woman

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short free verse poem using movie titles in the body of the poem.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Simple phrases that tie the romantic aspects of the poem together.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A larger font for my old eyes.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of Beauty is in the Eye of the Beholder

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

While beauty eye of the eye of the beholder this piece of writing is not just that. it needs to be rewritten to make it readable and useable.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Make this into sentences and Paragraphs. Using a larger font would also be helpful.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Truth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Truth

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem which attempts to define truth. It tells us that truth is light love and direction from God.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Repetive phrases are used to highlite important thoughts.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more. I enjoyed this.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



Review of Girl in the Mirror

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Stepping through the years using a mirror. Two people from different eras meet.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Brenda Mitchell is from the sixties and is a sixteen year old high school student.The other is from 2006

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Review of He Who Fills All  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of He Who Fills All

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem portraying the power of God as he was involved in the act of creation.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It speaks of the different elements of creation and God having His hand in each element.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of You And I  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of You and I

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A comparison of you and I. Over and over again the writer looks at the similarities and differences.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It only looks at this comparison.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more. I always enjoy your work.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of We'll Make It Work

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A flash fiction story about a young man who does not seem to be able to promote himself. He tries many different occupations until he works on small engine repair at which he has a talent.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Stan tried many things until he tried repairing engines.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of SELF SATISFACTION  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Self-Satisfaction

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Challenging article to promote self-satisfaction.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Shorter words, sentences and phrases make reading slower.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Use a larger font. This is difficult to read. Shorter sentences would also be helpful (see sentence two).

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Deer Fish  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of Deer Fish

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Can you imagine a salmon with antlers? Obviously this is impossible.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A simple element with no definite results.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of mGur on Spirit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of mGur on Spirit

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A Tibetan form of poetry relying on set number of syllables.
Interesting about expressing the freedom like a bird has in its ability to fly.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I have no suggestions for improvement.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of A tribute to President George H.W. Bush 1924 - 2018


First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A tribute to the 41st President of the United States, George W Bush.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A synopsis of the life the president.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

More detail.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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