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Review of Work  Open in new Window.
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Hi sa_xe, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Work" Open in new Window. by sa_xe

Clarity:A good title that describes well the contents.

Writing style:Biographical experience drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Indeed the structure is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line:---I take a moment to think about something other than work, and this is what happens. Every time. Every damn time.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well told account of a work day that I feel sure every reader can relate to. Personally I feel that human nature dictates that no one can like their job, it's just wrong.

sa_xe, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Leanna, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Shadows in the Code" Open in new Window. by Leanna

Clarity:A great title that catches the readers attention.

Writing style:Fantasy folktale drama

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is given, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---The staircase felt both solid and intangible beneath his feet, like walking on water frozen in time.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A entertaining tale with great descriptions that transport the reader into the tale staring at the Etherweb.

A great and creative idea for this well worded modern drama.

Strong characters that are described well and share realistic dialogue. This makes it easier for the reader to relate to the storyline.

A nice twist of mystery with the last line that leaves the reader wanting to know more.

Leanna, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of No Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi JCosmos, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "No Rain" Open in new Window. by JCosmos

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful poem even though a bit on the dark side. As a conspiracy nut naturally I really like this work. Nice use of the prompt. A nice touch adding the years date to the prophecy.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of ancient world that fell into chaos because of a drought caused by the lack of rain.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

JCosmos, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Storms  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impressions of the poem: "Storms" Open in new Window. by Chariot to the Heavens

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A refreshing fourteen line poem, seven well worded stanzas with a nice rhyming scheme that adds to the enchanting flow.
A poetic description of thunder storms.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul admiring natures powerful thunderstorm as they reflect on childhood memories. Thankful for the magic that God has revealed.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the mechanics of this entertaining and delightful poem.

Chariot to the Heavens, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Edgar Allan Poe  Open in new Window.
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My impressions of the poem: "Edgar Allan Poe" Open in new Window. by Daft Punk

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great idea to tribute a poem to the great Edgar Allan Poe.
This well worded poem carries a unique flow. Personally I think Edgar would approve.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a slim man in a black suit and hat walking through the dark woods among the Ravens and howling wolves while writing in a notepad.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Daft Punk, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Living Backwards  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Beholden, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Living Backwards" Open in new Window. by Beholden

Clarity:A great title that catches the readers attention.

Writing style:Sci-fi spiritual drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?An excellent structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Great dialog that is appropriate for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---"Ah," he said, "That's the thing, you see. I'm living backwards so I'm younger now than I was then."---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well told creative tale written in a realistic tone that makes it easy for the reader to relate with.

Nice opening that grabs the readers attention and makes him want to know more, drawing him deeper into the story.

Great characters sharing realistic dialog, this helps them to become real to the reader. Good descriptions of the setting that puts the reader right into this time traveling adventure.

A good touch with the living backwards realm capturing the readers imagination.

Beholden, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Sunsense  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi John Colhoquon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Sunsense" Open in new Window. by John Colhoquon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful nature poem that has a nice rhyming scheme that adds to it's timeless flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a wise philosopher in an ancient time, teaching his art to those enlightened souls that strive to learn.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the mechanics of this deep and entertaining work.

John Colhoquon, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Aiden Blackwood, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Invisible Thread " Open in new Window. by Aiden Blackwood

Clarity: A good title for this work.

Writing style:Informational non-fiction essay.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nicely laid out structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line:---The idea that our memories shape our perception of reality isn’t just philosophical—it has real-world implications.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well laid out philosophical work giving personal views on reality. This very informational work emphasizes some real points about understanding reality or trying to understand reality.

This well written and documented work has definitely got this readers mind spinning.

Aiden Blackwood, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Nicholas Patience, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"THE STRANGER'S PROMISE II" Open in new Window. by Nicholas Patience

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this suspense tale.

Writing style:Mystery folktale drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured so that it is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes the dialog does seem appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite lines:---As the sun set, they heard the familiar sound of Mr. Chekani's heavy boots climbing the steps to the front door. The siblings positioned themselves, ready to put their escape plan into action.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Well written mystery thriller introducing some strong characters with good descriptions of the setting and a bit of history. This tale does grab the reader's attention drawing him into the story while leaving him wanting to know more.

Nicholas Patience, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Keep on writing. Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Angelica Weatherby- Freezing0*, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Quiz over Vampires" Open in new Window. by Angelica Weatherby- Freezing0*

Clarity:A great title that describes the contents of this work good.

Writing style: Vampire quiz questions and answers.

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Are all 3 genres listed? Only one listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is good and does make it easy for the reader.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written very informational vampire quiz with answers.
Realistic entertaining format for this creative work that does help to capture the reader's imagination

Angelica Weatherby- Freezing0*, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Anna Marie Carison. I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Cuckoo's Clock" Open in new Window. by Anna Marie Carison

Clarity:A great title for this tale.

Writing style:Fantasy folktale drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line:---Along the shorelines, masterminded wizards showcase their talents by throwing out sand dollars from the legendary tales of long ago.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written entertaining fantasy tale. A great opening that really catches this readers attention.

Written in sort of an essay style with a lot of good folktale quotes. This seems to help to make it more real for the reader, helping it draw him into the story line.

This reader has a personal fondness for cuckoo clocks so I really love the title.

Anna Marie Carison, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Turning Circles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi intuey, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Turning Circles" Open in new Window. by intuey

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep creative well worded poem that carries a powerful flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul standing in a graveyard where time is streaming by with no past present or future.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A powerful poem that takes the reader into the work and caused his mind start to wonder.

intuey, thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
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Review of A Sweet Chase  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi MK Lowery, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"A Sweet Chase" Open in new Window. by MK Lowery

Clarity:A good title for this adventure tale.

Writing style:Animal adventure fantasy.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good format however a bit more line spacing would make it easier for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be specific for its speaker.

My favorite line:---Enid gave Alonzo that familiar toothy smile. “Aww…Lonnie. Is that you? Catch me if you can.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and creative folklore fantasy. Strong character with great visual descriptions that helps the reader to get into and picture the scene.

A great job with the dialogue which is believable and makes this tale even more entertaining.



MK Lowery, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a bit more line spacing with perhaps a blank line between paragraphs and maybe even a larger font to make it easier and more appealing for those of us readers who have weaker eyes.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Woven in the Dark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi C.W.Rickman, I came across this story while random reviewing.

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My impressions of:"Woven in the Dark" Open in new Window. by C.W.Rickman

Clarity:Seems to be a good title for this tale.

Writing style:Fantasy folklore drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The format and structure indeed makes it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes the dialogue seems to be appropriate for its specific speaker.

My favorite line:--- I see it in the way Gosse smiles at us, as though we’re pieces on his chessboard.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written prologue in a nice orderly fashion that is easy for the reader. Great descriptions that helps the reader get into this folklore tale.

Written with a nice personal realistic touch that really helps draw the reader into the page.

C.W.Rickman, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Well written story, a good proofread and edit never hurts. Personally when proof reading I try to eliminate starting a sentence with and or but, probably just me but seems like an AI thing.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Raja Mehwish Ali I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"THE BIRDIES PART 2" Open in new Window. by Raja Mehwish Ali

Clarity:Good title for this entertaining fantasy drama.

Writing style: Geographical fantasy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A good structure that is somewhat easy for the reader

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- As a result of the bird invasion, my teacher, Annie Hayworth, was pecked to death and saved me by pushing me into the school building. She became the birds' victim herself.< Cathy shed a tear.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: An interesting tale with great descriptions and a strong character that does draw the reader right into the action. I like the references to 1963 kind of a special year for me.

This reads much like a true story I like your references to cousins, this seems to personalize and helps the reader relate to the tale.

I have not read Part 1 however I am considering it because I like the flow of this entertaining story.

Raja Mehwish Ali, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: For this reader I am not used to the arrows instead of quotation marks, which is how it reads on my computer.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi -perception- I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Minutes Before The Fall" Open in new Window. by -perception-

Clarity:Seems to be a good title for this relationship tale.

Writing style: Teen fiction drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed? Only one listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nicely formatted tale however the structure seems a little crowded, could use a little more line spacing to make it easier for those readers like me with the weak eyes.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---I didn't even try to keep up with what was spilling out of his mouth.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Well written and well worded with great descriptions that help the reader relate to this tale.

I think this reads much like a true story which makes it easy for the reader to get drawn in to this entertaining story.

-perception-, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a bit more line spacing and perhaps a blank line between paragraphs to make this morning inviting for browsers or would be readers.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Lizzie Winter's Fairy I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"An Act of Kindness" Open in new Window. by Lizzie Winter's Fairy

Clarity: A good title for this entertaining tale.

Writing style:Relationship, contest entry, drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The format and structure does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---“I’m fine, Willard,” said Rose. “But I am in a bit of a hurry. It’s almost dinner time and I need to get to cooking.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A entertaining short story with strong characters and good visual descriptions. Especially considering a contest entry which are usually governed by a fast timeline.

Lizzie Winter's Fairy, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of For Love  Open in new Window.
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Hi again VENACAVA I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "For Love" Open in new Window. by VENACAVA

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A strong interesting free verse style love poem. Well worded so that the emotions can definitely be felt.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a young couple in a prehistoric time trying to learn how to make their relationship beneficial for both.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with the grammar spelling on mechanics of this interesting work.

VENACAVA, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Dead Man's Regret  Open in new Window.
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Hi again VENACAVA I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Dead Man's Regret" Open in new Window. by VENACAVA

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this tale.

Writing style:Dark fiction drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure seems a little crowded especially for those of us readers with weak eyes.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes.

My favorite line:---I will doom the life I have left to live; by not living it at all.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A strong emotional tale that does get the readers interest with a realistic approach that feels like you're talking directly to the reader.

Good strong descriptions that help the reader to visualize the dark scene.

VENACAVA, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a bit more line spacing with perhaps a blank line between paragraphs, maybe larger font to help those readers with weak eyes.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review of Belonging  Open in new Window.
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Hi again Jacky, I came across this tale while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Belonging" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great opening line that I certainly can relate to. I love the historical descriptions followed with the -its a small world twist.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a happy soul enjoying and admiring everything around before getting hit up by times twisted sense of humor.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: This reader has certainly enjoyed this delightful tale

Jacky, thank you for sharing your art.

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Review of Our Perfect House  Open in new Window.
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Hi Jacky, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Our Perfect House" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity: Seems to be a great title for this delightful tale.

Writing style:Contest entry, personal drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only contest entry is listed by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Nicely formatted with a good structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes the dialogue does seem appropriate to its speaker.

My favorite line:--- Though we had plenty of time, even after our child was born, we wouldn’t actually need a swing set… but that’s what brought us to the feeling that it was about time to seriously think house.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and very entertaining tale. Especially considering a contest entry that was probably limited on time.

A nice twist for the end that caught this reader off guard.

Jacky, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Hi again HuntersMoon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Music of the Spheres" Open in new Window. by HuntersMoon

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful Villanelle formed poem. I think the villanelle is my favorite forms of poetry. No doubt a hard art to master, this delightful work has achieved that mark.

---This is a music found in heaven's light---
---a Symphony of stars and planets bright---
A heavenly flow can be felt through out. Another Awesome HuntersMoon masterpiece.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of Angles standing at heavens gate in awe of the wondrous beauties.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: An enchanting poem followed with a nice definition for the form of the Villanelle.

HuntersMoon, thank you for sharing your art.
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Hi VENACAVA, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Just A Little More" Open in new Window. by VENACAVA

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded deep poem that describes time so well that you can hear the sound of that annoying alarm clock.

Indeed time can be and is a mysterious phenomenon, all through life we try to understand it yet it changes second by second.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a worker reaching to hit snooze on the alarm clock to get in those last few minutes of sleep. Then running late the rest of the day.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep and entertaining poem.

VENACAVA, thank you for sharing your poem.
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My impressions of the poem: "Autumn Pear/Apple Pudding Cake" Open in new Window. by Princess Megan Rose

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful picture of a loving Grandmother cooking for her visiting grandson. The Autumn Pear and Apple Pudding cake is described so well the reader can smell and almost taste the delicious treat.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The image of a loving family reunion where the Grandmother prepares a feast with fresh fruit and love, is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find.

Princess Megan Rose, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.
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Hi again DanGauldin, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: ""What I Hear"" Open in new Window. by DanGauldin

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful realistic modern English Sonnet. The rhyming scheme helps the realistic flow of this entertaining poem about everyday things.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of school buddies setting around passing time the best they can at a certain point in the flow of time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that this reader can see.

DanGauldin, thank you for sharing your poem.
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