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Review of singing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Snaliilpebbles, came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"singing" Open in new Window. by Snaliilpebbles

Clarity:An interesting title for this tale.

Writing style:Autobiographical experience drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A bit more linespacing would make it easier for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- Look at me! I am playing music and I am good!---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: An entertaining well written story with great descriptions that helped the reader to feel as if they are right there with you.

Snaliilpebbles, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider experimenting with a bit more line spacing and possibly a blank line between the paragraphs to make this tale easier for those of us with weak eyes as well as more inviting for browsers.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi The fatal descent I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"He changed my life..." Open in new Window. by The fatal descent

Clarity:A nice title for this tale.

Writing style: Romance, coming to age, drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice strucure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is appropriate for the speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Well written story that well emphasizes the main point.

First loves are sculpted into our young minds so deep that often they become like a fantasy that can't be compared to anything in reality.

Time circles in mysterious ways and often turn those ways to reveal the secrets of learning from experience.



The fatal descent, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Joseph
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Review of As Far As I Know  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Kermit, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"As Far As I Know" Open in new Window. by Kermit

Clarity:Interesting title for this tale.

Writing style:Modern mystery drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?By listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure and format that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does indeed seem specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:---Kay answered, "Not as far as I know".---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and very entertaining tale that could have come right out of today's headlines.

Short yet makes its points well with a few words, leaving a little mystery at the end. I like this tale and feel like many readers will be able to relate to it in these modern times.

Kermit, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider experimenting with the title, maybe -Not as far as I know.

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Joseph
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Review of Improve your life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Kermit, I came across this essay while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the essay: "Improve your life" Open in new Window. by Kermit

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A positive and inspirational article on improving your life. These well chosen words say a lot and are great advice to keep a positive life.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a wise philosopher giving advice to the less experienced.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see in the spelling or mechanics of this well well written article.

Kermit, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Gone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Jacky, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Gone" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity: A nice title for this tale.

Writing style:Flash fiction, contest entry, drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only two listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Well structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is appropriate for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---He was rich, powerful, but he’d give it all up in a minute if he could just get Susan back.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written tale as always by Jacky.

Indeed the grass always looks greener in the other pasture.

Jacky, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi coregeomatics, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Building Permit Necessary" Open in new Window. by coregeomatics

Clarity:A good title for this article.

Writing style: Educational informational article.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only one listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.



My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:An informative article for construction or remodeling in Regina. A well worded and well laid out article on this subject.

In most towns and cities the permits requirements are similar with differences depending on the location. The farther away from the crowded areas you get the more lenient you will find the permit requirements.

The farther away from civilization you get people seem to be more personal about being told what they can do on their own property. This is understandable seeing how it has been done that way for hundreds of years. It is still a good idea to check with your local building authority to avoid any penalties. Many times it really just seems like a money racket but you got to pay to play.

coregeomatics, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider adding more blank lines between the bold title and the paragraphs to make it appear more professional.

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Joseph
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Review of Giantess Sofia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi RONLOZ, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Giantess Sofia" Open in new Window. by RONLOZ

Clarity:A great title for this humorous and entertaining tale.

Writing style:Mythological fantasy drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that makes it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- He told me he would grant me 3 wishes, but I asked for infinite wishes, and the genie agreed.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A delightful well written humorous folktale.
A strong character and great details keep the readers interest peaked throughout this entertaining work.

RONLOZ, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi JustaRandomGuy99, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The JW Bible translation failing itself" Open in new Window. by JustaRandomGuy99

Clarity: A good title for this work.

Writing style: Religious, spiritual, opinion.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate for the speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: This well written short article points out some contradictions in the Jehovah witness Bible in the point of view of the author.

A well written and laid out article that makes a strong point.

JustaRandomGuy99, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Ladybug, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Thankful holiday " Open in new Window. by Ladybug

Clarity:A nice title for this work.

Writing style:Biographical experience drama.

Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Your Dad seems to be a very creative person. In these modern times we often have to a bit creative in order not to upset the growing biases of modern society.

This well worded and well described short story seems to get your main point across well.

Ladybug, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Cheshire, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Canyons of the Mind" Open in new Window. by Cheshire

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A unique rhythm is felt in this deep emotional work. In those dark times of life often comes the most creative works. Well worded allowing the emotions to reach out grabbing the reader to hold their attention.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul dreaming while tumbling through the dream world then trying to make sense of it all.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep entertaining work.

Cheshire, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Lost and Found  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Jacky, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Lost and Found" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity:A great title for this entertaining tale.

Writing style:Experience drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Even though a contest entry, still by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.


My favorite line:--- Calming down, I realized the wash was done, so I might as well get it in the dryer before I go over to Mrs. Green’s to reaffirm her opinion that I was an idiot…---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written modern tale that I'm sure most readers can relate to in this modern age. I enjoyed this, it brought back memories of some of my own past experiences with cell phones getting dropped in the mud then being run over by a truck and still work. Indeed they are tougher than you think especially today with most things disposable.

Jacky, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of In Slow Motion  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi BrokenRing, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "In Slow Motion" Open in new Window. by BrokenRing

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep moving poem describing effects of time emphasizing on the speed of time and the advantages of making time to smell the roses.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul in a boat being tossed through the rapid currents of time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

BrokenRing, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Our Miracle  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Ann72, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Our Miracle" Open in new Window. by Ann72

Clarity:A great title for this positive inspirational tale.

Writing style: Spiritual folktale drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure and format that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Yes the dialog is appropriate for the speaker.

My favorite line:--- She reached out herself, and like he was a feather, she pulled him out.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A wonderful and entertaining folktale that gets in the mind of the reader while holding their attention with this very inspirational and motivating tale.

Written as a true story makes this seem real to the reader helping them to relate with this strong story.

Ann72, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider breaking down the longer paragraph's into shorter ones to make it appear more inviting for browsers or potential readers.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Steady heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi _13poes, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Steady heart" Open in new Window. by _13poes

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A deep and strong work written in a bit of a rough draft manner.
A lot of good work here that you may consider editing with a nice structure to Polish the work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul setting on the river of time feeling like they've got stuck at one point, then carried away by the Rapids of time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or the mechanics of this entertaining work.

_13poes, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Sleeping Aid  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again HuntersMoon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Sleeping Aid" Open in new Window. by HuntersMoon

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:As expected another well worded delightful and entertaining work from HuntersMoon.
A nice rhyming scheme contributes to the entertaining flow of this short delightful poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul awakening and trying to interpret a dream.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

HuntersMoon, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Thank You, Dear  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Bodhisattwa Parekh I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Thank You, Dear" Open in new Window. by Bodhisattwa Parekh

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful romance poem. Short yet carries a unique flow.
A good work for express it in eight.


Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul looking back through the portal of time emphasizing on the most happy times.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining short to the point work.

Bodhisattwa Parekh, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of WRITERS' PROMPTS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Woodswomen, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "WRITERS' PROMPTS" Open in new Window. by Woodswomen

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful poem with a great use of the prompt words. A realistic tone adds to the unique flow of this entertaining poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a writer under pressure of deadlines and commitments yet still coming up with a beautiful entertaining work.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Woodswomen, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Mayfly [169]  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Kare iSun Enga I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Mayfly [169]" Open in new Window. by Kare iSun Enga

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written poem that carries a peaceful ✌flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of two young lovers beside the river in a beautiful realm.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I combined with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this beautiful work.

Kare iSun Enga, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of Harsh Hand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Hill, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Harsh Hand" Open in new Window. by Hill

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong political poem emphasis on the broken governing system. This is a well worded deep poem that I feel most people can relate to.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the upper class like kings and Queens enjoying the burdens of the peasants.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find.

Hill, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of Good Times  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Winchester Jones, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Good Times" Open in new Window. by Winchester Jones

Clarity:A good title for this contest entry tale.

Writing style:Folktale drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Even though a contest entry still by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Great dialog that does seekm specific for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---His eyes ran along the curving staircase to the second floor, searching for the row of black and white pictures of his children, children grown now and gone, as were their pictures.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and entertaining short story with great descriptions of both the setting and the characters. I liked this delightful tale.

Winchester Jones, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write On!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Last Minute Number Crunching" Open in new Window. by Maryann

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A delightful poem emphasizing on the pressure put on taxpayers to pay their taxes by a certain deadline.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of taxpayers everywhere pulling their hair and making mistakes as they rush to get their taxes done before the dooming deadline.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: An awesome job for this creative story that rings true for most of us.

Maryann, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of "Casper"  Open in new Window.
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Hi D.B., I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: ""Casper"" Open in new Window. by D.B.

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful limerick style poem about Casper the friendly ghost.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of kids trick or treating on Halloween while being protected from all the spooky ghosts from their friend Casper the friendly ghost.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

D.B., thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Yellow Sun  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Anna Marie Carlson, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Yellow Sun " Open in new Window. by Anna Marie Carlson

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A simply delightful poem emphasizing on the suns deception, you don't want me to see your true colors. What are you trying to hide?

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of ancient man observing and studying the mysterious routine of the sun.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can see with grammar spelling on mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Anna Marie Carlson, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of King Dog  Open in new Window.
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Hi Maryann I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "King Dog" Open in new Window. by Maryann

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: They say dog is man's best friend indeed this is true. That is what these 5 lines and beautiful picture says to this reader- King Dog - best friend.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see an image of man developing through time yet always by his side was his faithful and dependable best friend.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I combined with the spelling grammar mechanics of this delightful short poem.

Maryann, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of Shorty  Open in new Window.
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Hi Shorty, I came across this tale while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Shorty" Open in new Window. by Shorty

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful and realistic dialog for this short tale.
Looks to me like you did a great job for the prompt requirement.

I here short comments all the time from my daughter and wife. They put everything on the lower shelves where I can't find it, I have the upper shelves to myself.

I really like this short entertaining short story.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:An awesome job with the mechanics of this short tale.

Shorty, thank you for sharing your work.
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