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Review of WRITERS' PROMPTS  Open in new Window.
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Hi Woodswomen, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "WRITERS' PROMPTS" Open in new Window. by Woodswomen

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful poem with a great use of the prompt words. A realistic tone adds to the unique flow of this entertaining poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a writer under pressure of deadlines and commitments yet still coming up with a beautiful entertaining work.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Woodswomen, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Mayfly [169]  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Kare iSun Enga I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Mayfly [169]" Open in new Window. by Kare iSun Enga

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written poem that carries a peaceful ✌flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of two young lovers beside the river in a beautiful realm.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I combined with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this beautiful work.

Kare iSun Enga, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of Harsh Hand  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Hill, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Harsh Hand" Open in new Window. by Hill

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong political poem emphasis on the broken governing system. This is a well worded deep poem that I feel most people can relate to.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the upper class like kings and Queens enjoying the burdens of the peasants.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find.

Hill, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of Good Times  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Winchester Jones, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Good Times" Open in new Window. by Winchester Jones

Clarity:A good title for this contest entry tale.

Writing style:Folktale drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Even though a contest entry still by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Great dialog that does seekm specific for it's speaker.

My favorite line:---His eyes ran along the curving staircase to the second floor, searching for the row of black and white pictures of his children, children grown now and gone, as were their pictures.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and entertaining short story with great descriptions of both the setting and the characters. I liked this delightful tale.

Winchester Jones, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write On!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Last Minute Number Crunching" Open in new Window. by Maryann

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A delightful poem emphasizing on the pressure put on taxpayers to pay their taxes by a certain deadline.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of taxpayers everywhere pulling their hair and making mistakes as they rush to get their taxes done before the dooming deadline.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: An awesome job for this creative story that rings true for most of us.

Maryann, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of "Casper"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi D.B., I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: ""Casper"" Open in new Window. by D.B.

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful limerick style poem about Casper the friendly ghost.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of kids trick or treating on Halloween while being protected from all the spooky ghosts from their friend Casper the friendly ghost.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

D.B., thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Yellow Sun  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Anna Marie Carlson, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Yellow Sun " Open in new Window. by Anna Marie Carlson

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A simply delightful poem emphasizing on the suns deception, you don't want me to see your true colors. What are you trying to hide?

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of ancient man observing and studying the mysterious routine of the sun.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can see with grammar spelling on mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Anna Marie Carlson, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of King Dog  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "King Dog" Open in new Window. by Maryann

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: They say dog is man's best friend indeed this is true. That is what these 5 lines and beautiful picture says to this reader- King Dog - best friend.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see an image of man developing through time yet always by his side was his faithful and dependable best friend.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I combined with the spelling grammar mechanics of this delightful short poem.

Maryann, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of Shorty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Shorty, I came across this tale while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Shorty" Open in new Window. by Shorty

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful and realistic dialog for this short tale.
Looks to me like you did a great job for the prompt requirement.

I here short comments all the time from my daughter and wife. They put everything on the lower shelves where I can't find it, I have the upper shelves to myself.

I really like this short entertaining short story.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:An awesome job with the mechanics of this short tale.

Shorty, thank you for sharing your work.
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Review of The Rosy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SeanFhear, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Rosy" Open in new Window. by SeanFhear

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong poem with a nice rhyming pattern that contributes to the unique tone and realistic flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of my late uncle who was always happy when he had a bottle in his hand, sometimes funny, sometimes sad, most the time happy happy happy.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this most entertaining poem.

SeanFhear, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Uncle and Nephew  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi THANKFUL SONALI Library Class! I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Uncle and Nephew" Open in new Window. by THANKFUL SONALI Library Class!

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful Hobbit tale written in entertaining stanzas that carry a natural ♮💐flow.
Which led to a legend that Tolkien has told.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a magical ring that leads young Frodo on a mystical adventure. Often times an inheritance can be deceiving.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A beautifully structured work.

THANKFUL SONALI Library Class! thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Wien Swann, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Paths of Admiration" Open in new Window. by Wien Swann

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep well worded poem that has a delightful flow. For this reader the first stanza is my favorite.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a beautiful butterfly 🦋 emerging from it's cocoon.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful tune.

Wien Swann, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of The Wait  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Winchester Jones, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Wait" Open in new Window. by Winchester Jones

Clarity: An intriguing title that captures the reader's attention.

Writing style:Folktale adventure drama.

Are all 3 genres listed? Even though a contest entry, still by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Well structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does indeed sound specific for its speaker.

My favorite line:---The barking outside began to sound human as the throaty growl of tanks grew closer, perhaps even in sight now, though neither man rose to look through the window.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and nicely described adventure tale that holds the readers attention well.

Short yet makes it's point well with a few words just the way today's reader likes things.

Winchester Jones, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Sun, His Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Wien Swann, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Sun, His Eyes" Open in new Window. by Wien Swann

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: An intriguing romance poem with a random rhyming scheme that contributes to the overall realistic flow of this delightful poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a person trying to train their inner soul to find the positive in every situation.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Wien Swann, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Eric Harper, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"To Turn or Not to Turn" Open in new Window. by Eric Harper

Clarity:A great title for this attention grabbing tale.

Writing style:Fantasy mystery drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Indeed the dialog is specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:---"You're a mortal. Turning?"---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A decidedly different kind of vampire story. A well written vampire mystery that grabs the reader's attention and throws them into a time-loop. Rereading and trying to solve the puzzle.

A great idea for the mind boggling twist, this really gets the readers mind working.

Eric Harper, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Lunacy🌓  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Scribbleeba, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Lunacy🌓" Open in new Window. by Scribbleeba

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:An inspirational work emphasizing on the thin line between dark and light.
There is good and evil in everything... This is so true. Learning to find the good and ignore the evil is the problem all humans have to deal with.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image through the portal of time of a people who are slowly learning how to tell good from evil.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find would the mechanics grammar or spelling of this inspirational work.

Scribbleeba, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Lee, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Grandma's magical home visit " Open in new Window. by Lee

Clarity:Seems to be a good title for this tale.

Writing style:Family sci-fi drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured and formatted making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem appropriate to it's speaker.

My favorite line:---Tyler and Dylan, in awe, listened to tales of hardship and triumph, of a time when horse-drawn carriages were the fastest mode of transport and news travelled by word of mouth rather than the click of a button.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could travel in time and meet our ancestors.

A well written tale with a realistic tone that quickly takes the reader into the past with the characters of the story.

Great descriptions that make it easy for the reader to picture the setting. This helps them into the story line.

A great idea for this entertaining folk tale.

Lee, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider experimenting with the title to better describe the contents of this delightful story.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of All Together  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Lydest, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "All Together" Open in new Window. by Lydest

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A simple yet deep poem with a unique style and tone that adds to the flow of this delightful poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of young parents hosting their first sleepover, to the end of being kept awake and on their toes.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Lydest, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Whispered secrets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jo Paynter, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Whispered secrets" Open in new Window. by Jo Paynter

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: I love dandelions too, mother earth's beauty indeed is indescribable. Everything that grows is beautiful at least for one stage.

Such a beautiful poem . At times it is the simplest things that make for the most extraordinary views .

Artistic Voice and Imagery: In today's modern fast-paced high tech society so many take for granted the beauty from stopping to smell the roses.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this beautiful work.

Jo Paynter, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Paroem, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Hickory Crab Haikus" Open in new Window. by Paroem

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A strong and deep mythological style poem that puts the readers imagination to work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a portal into a mythological world where a soul is caught up into the times with both rewards and disappointments.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Paroem, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Ashen, Uncertain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Elisa: Stik or Treat, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Ashen, Uncertain" Open in new Window. by Elisa: Stik or Treat

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:The emotions can be felt from this deep work.

A unique structure that works well and adds to the realistic tone.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a war torn world where a soul is torn between the opposing sides with friends on each.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: The spelling grammar and mechanics work well together for this deep poem.

Elisa: Stik or Treat, thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Veronika, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "No Need to Languish" Open in new Window. by Veronika

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:An inspirational well worded poem that carries a realistic and unique flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul floating in time searching for the right time to land.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the spelling, grammar or mechanics of this enjoyable poem

Veronika, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Naomi, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Luis Happy Baskets" Open in new Window. by Naomi

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Wow what a positive attitude that I wish everyone had. The world would be so much better. If only everyone could receive and except positive energy then return equal or a bit more, before overthinking to come up with all kinds of motives. The world would be so much better.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of an angel that only comprehends helping people. A nearly extinct form in today's modern society.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep work.

Naomi, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi wKareEnga%uMontana I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Bare branches [#29 Suzanne] " Open in new Window. by wKareEnga%uMontana

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Realistic childhood crushes no doubt make a life long impact on our inner being. It is amazing how those few childhood years can carve memories in our mind like written in stone. Personally I can remember much of those more clearly then those of a few years ago.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a soul looking into the sea of time and lusting after the amplified memories of that one that should've of been. The one that got away.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A good proofread and edit never hurts. I see much potential in this deep creative writing work.

wKareEnga%uMontana, thank you for sharing your poem.

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Review of Deliberation  Open in new Window.
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Hi again Sumojo, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Deliberation " Open in new Window. by Sumojo

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful poem. A nice rhyming scheme that with the deep emotions give a strong and unique tone to this delightful poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul perched on a Cliff staring at the ocean in a mesmerizing trance.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this short yet entertaining classic.

Sumojo, thank you for sharing your poem.
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