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Hi Eravathi I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Allusive Echoes " Open in new Window. by Eravathi

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A twenty four line philosophical poem with a constant rhyming scheme. Focusing on our interpretations of time.

The dimension of time is a mystery that the human mind has yet to comprehend.
' A whisper weaved in space and time. '

This deep poem carries a mystic flow.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the spelling, grammar, or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Eravathi thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Trick and Treat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi again thereBdragons I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Trick and Treat" Open in new Window. by thereBdragons

Clarity: A good title for this ghostly tale.

Writing style: Holiday mystery Fantasy.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*Sleepy* Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A great structure that is easy for the reader. *Sleepy*

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Sleepy* Good dialogue that is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---This seemed to confuse the older humans.
“Don’t you mean trick or treat?” they would ask.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good opening line that makes the reader curious and wants to read more. A creative story, well written, entertaining and short, Straight to the point, the way the modern reader likes things.

thereBdragons thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi LBurks I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Remember To Always, Always Say Please" Open in new Window. by LBurks

Clarity:A good title for this childrens tale.

Writing style:Childrens educational drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one given *Sad* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure is somewhat easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Indeed.*Smirk*
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A nice opening with Dan and Noel. The first nine lines are strong with a good childrens flow.

A well written tale, however, keep in mind that children like us these days have a very short attention span.

For a children's book, I would definitely consider illustrations. More line spacing and probably a different font and font size. Keep in mind in these modern high paced times children to have a short attention span and don't expect things to be as long as they once were.

LBurks thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider the suggestions above. More line spacing, different font and font size. A good edit. Add some illustrations.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of 1969  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Sumojo I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "1969" Open in new Window. by Sumojo

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: 'One small step for man, one giant leap for mankind.' Such a strong phrase that was imprinted on my mind a few years back in 1969 when in the 1st grade we were allowed to watch the moon landing on closed circuit TV. This work has sent this reader back in time.

1969 is a well worded and powerful 75 word free verse style fantasy poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a peaceful, enlightened race visiting our moon. When suddenly their peaceful and tranquil environment is interrupted by the noise of a loud spaceship landing on the moon with an annoying and arrogant race who think they are the only ones that exist.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the mechanics of this powerful poem that has sent this reader back in time.

Sumojo thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Jeffrey S. Callico I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:" ICKY EXPOSED ROTTING FLESH" Open in new Window. by Jeffrey S. Callico

Clarity: An interesting title although I don't really get that from the content.

Writing style: Modern biographical drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed? Only 1 is listed, *Sad* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? *Smirk2* A good structure and format that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? *Smirk2* Indeed.

My favorite line:---Is “love” an “occasion”? Can it be? Maybe for Edward, but you got to remember what kind of guy he is, the definitions he has for “love” in the first place. To him, love can be anything, anybody.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: I like the opening line. I got names for those people that can't get my name right too.
A well written, entertaining tale that is written, realistic and reads just like a true story.

Great descriptions. You have a wonderful way with words. To make me feel like you was just talking to me beside the campfire.

A nice ending line, 'nothing more, nothing less, right?'


Jeffrey S. Callico thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Maybe consider changing the title to better describe the contents of this entertaining work.*Smirk2*

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Charity Marie -*Heart* I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Death of a Surrender" Open in new Window. by Charity Marie -*Heart*

Clarity: A strong and interesting title.

Writing style: Fantasy, history, Drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*Sparkle* Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*Sparkle* Nicely structured article that does make it easier for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Sparkle* Good job with the dialogue.

My favorite line:---It was a slaughter down to the last rebel soldier. The gunfire lasted only until sunset and although many attempted to escape in the heat of the battle, most all were captured. Even with their larger numbers, many Union soldiers died or were injured along with the Confederates...”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: History has always fascinated me, and many times in the course of events one can't help but to ask himself what if? This is a well written and very realistic description of events that could have been true under different circumstances.

I hope that you won the history contest. This well written article has got this readers mind working on history.
A creative idea and well written story.


Charity Marie -*Heart* thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Joseph
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Review of A Clean Escape  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi L.A.Saxe I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"A Clean Escape" Open in new Window. byL.A.Saxe

Clarity: A good title that piques the reader's curiosity.

Writing style: Flash fiction. Comedy, Drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*StarStruck* Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*StarStruck* A well structured work that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*StarStruck*Yes.

My favorite line:---In the blink of an eye, the door swung open, and Stan pounced out, coming face to face with… the cleaning trolley — That explained the jingling.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: An interesting opening that does hold the reader's attention and persuades him to want to read more.
A well written and creative storyline. Short yet it makes its point well. A good kind of humorous ending.

L.A.Saxe thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Joseph
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Review of Torn Apart  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Torn Apart" Open in new Window. by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A free verse style poem loaded with emotion and focusing on the dark inner self that we all have to keep disciplined in our inner mind.
'I am
torn apart
but still standing—
not whole,
but still
mine.'

Well worded so that the reader can definitely feel the emotions that scream from this poem.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar, spelling or mechanics of this strong poem.

Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Amera Jane I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Love is the most sacred of codes" Open in new Window. by Amera Jane

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A twelve line free verse style poem focusing on emotional codes and the way they make us feel.
Well worded so that the reader can easily feel the emotions. This entertaining short poem carries A delightful flow.

' Silence can be devastating.
Love is the most sacred of codes.'

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Amera Jane thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Mangiare  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Jatog the Green I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Mangiare" Open in new Window. by Jatog the Green

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A very entertaining concrete form poem focusing on getting back to eating Mama's cooking. What a great focus.
A delightful poem. I am glad to see that it won Writer's Cramp. I know for a fact that writing a concrete form poem can get very tedious at times.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul returning home after a long departure. Looking so forward to that good old home cooking of Mama's again.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Jatog the Green thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Bad Dream  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again NormaJean AKA CHEER QUEEN I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Bad Dream" Open in new Window. by NormaJean AKA CHEER QUEEN

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: An annoying dream about everybody trying to scam you with vacations and then you wake up on a vacation. What a lovely story.
I think most people like me can relate to this story due to all the scammers always out to get you in these modern times.

A very well written, humorous short story. That is very entertaining.


NormaJean AKA CHEER QUEEN thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Evil Lurks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi again ThereBdragons I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Evil Lurks" Open in new Window. by ThereBdragons

Clarity: An intriguing title that does make me want to read more.

Writing style: Mystery horror Drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*Smile* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*RollEyes* A blank line between paragraphs would make it easier on the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Smile*

My favorite line:---“Can you believe our luck, Woof?” The dog bristled and stood stiff-legged as if trying to defend his master. A shadow darkened the room beside Dibble.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good opening that catches the reader's attention and introduces the storyline.
A well written and creative storyline, written, short and to the point, just the way the modern reader likes things.
A nice ending that gets the reader to thinking.

ThereBdragons thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a blank line between paragraphs to make the story appear more appealing.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Wandering Thoughts I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "We Keep On Repeating Our Past Mistakes" Open in new Window. by Wandering Thoughts

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A well written and well worded lyrics style poem focusing on politics. Politics is one of those subjects with the most strongly opinionated views. A subject most people just try to avoid unless they want an argument.

This work carries A delightful flow and definitely hits on a lot of strong points.
'This US vs THEM mentality must be set aside;'


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the mechanics of this entertaining and strong work.

Wandering Thoughts thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of History Repeated.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Mary Ann MCPhedran I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"History Repeated." Open in new Window. by Mary Ann MCPhedran

Clarity: A good title for this biographical story.

Writing style: Biographical Drama.

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My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written biographical story about Frankie and Molly. Short and to the point, just the way the modern reader likes things these days.

History repeating, however, Molly and Frankie seems like a bit of a sad story.

Mary Ann MCPhedranthank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: There appears to be an ML tag after the first word 'Frankie'.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi WindSpirit3 I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Written from Chakras " Open in new Window. by WindSpirit3

Clarity: A good title for this psychedelic adventure tale.

Writing style: Spiritual experience. Drama.

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Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*Smile*

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Smile*

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: I like the poetic opening lines for this journey. Well described in a diary style format with such great descriptions that the reader is soon transported to that psychedelic realm alongside you.

Indeed, finding oneself is definitely a spiritual adventure that not many people get to experience.

WindSpirit3 thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it. You have gotten my mind to spinning.

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Joseph
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Review of General's lament  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Hi Jim I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "General's lament" Open in new Window. by Jim

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A ten line, free verse style poem. Descriptions of one suffering from writer's block. Well described, I can certainly relate, as well as many others I think.


Free verse poetry is a form of poetry that does not adhere to a fixed regular Rhyme or metrical scheme allowing for greater creative freedom.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the grammar, spelling or mechanics of this strong work.

Jim thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Quatae Turnage I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Stay In A Brick House " Open in new Window. by Quatae Turnage

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A delightful six line free verse style poem, that reminds me a bit of the fairy tale The Three Little Pigs. Indeed, brick houses are stronger than most.

Free verse poetry is a form of poetry that does not adhere to a fixed regular Rhyme or metrical scheme allowing for greater creative freedom.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Quatae Turnage thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Constitution  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Patricia A. Maniaca I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Constitution" Open in new Window. by Patricia A. Maniaca

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A great picture for this groovy poem. A well worded free verse style poem that leaves plenty of room for the reader to read into it what ever he wishes. This poem carries a modern day realistic flow. From start to finish.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Patricia A. Maniaca thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem: "The Quiet Drowning " Open in new Window. by ambyp

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A thirty-three line free verse style poem focusing on the quiet drowning. Well worded short stanzas that pack a lot of emotion.

At certain points in one's life, most all people get these feelings of seeming invisible to the world around you. Time has a funny sense of humor, and I'm sure it will be no time until you look back from your happy life to this poem and remember this particular low point.

Be happy, make time to smell the roses.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

ambyp thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Kay Carter I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Sunflower Shutters" Open in new Window. by Kay Carter

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep well worded 17 line free verse style poem. Written in a unique Gothic style that really works well for this poem, it gives it a deep flow.

Indeed embracing adulthood is definitely enough to give one Gothic feelings.

Free verse poetry is a form of poetry that does not adhere to a fixed regular Rhyme or metrical scheme allowing for greater creative freedom.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Kay Carter thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Quatae Turnage I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Life is Like a Road " Open in new Window. by Quatae Turnage

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful seven line free verse style poem describing how life is like a road.
'Life is like a road
Filled with straights and curves'
What a great line.

Free verse poetry is a form of poetry that does not adhere to a fixed regular Rhyme or metrical scheme allowing for greater creative freedom.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Quatae Turnage thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Apparently James  Open in new Window.
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Hi again Jacky I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Apparently James" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity:An intriguing title.

Writing style: Animal folklore drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Good dialog.

My favorite line:---As I caught up, there was James holding a straggly, whiny gray kitten. “Gram! He’s all alone! I bet he’s hungry!” The kitten actually purred. “You have to take him home!”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written short story focusing on friendship and how pets can become part of our lives.

Jacky thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again Maryann I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Sights and Sounds of Fall" Open in new Window. by Maryann

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Such a lovely description of the sights and sounds of fall.
Well worded haiku style poem that truly carries a refreshing flow.

A haiku is a traditional Japanese poetic form consistent of three lines and 17 syllables typically arranged in a 5-7-5 pattern.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the birds soaring gracefully in the fall skies against the mountains painted with their colored leaves.

Maryann thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Surface  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jeffrey Meyer I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Surface" Open in new Window. by Jeffrey Meyer

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:"Surface" is a delightful well worded five line free verse style poem focusing on the environment. Short yet deep with a philosophical description of rain soaking into the fertile ground.

A Free verse poem is poetry that does not follow a fixed rhyme rhyme scheme or meter. It mimics the rhythms of naturals speech providing poets freedom to shape their lines stanzas and overall structure based on the emotional content of the poem.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with this delightful poem.

Jeffrey Meyer thank you for sharing your poem.
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Hi again Ichabod Crane I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Stevie Wonder - born on May 13, 1950 " Open in new Window. by Ichabod Crane

Clarity:The title makes me think this is going to be more of a biography or a history type article.

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Stevie Wonder is no doubt an incredible and talented artist. Considered one of the most influential artists of the 20th century. To accomplish as much as he has with a disability like blindness is truly marvelous.

Well done! A creative idea with a well arranged word find puzzle focusing on the artist Stevie Wonder.



Ichabod Crane thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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