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Review of Poetry  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Fun! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the imagery in poetry.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
I can easily see birds soaring with sounds swirling, then shimmering back to earth. A vocal symphony of memories and symbolism plays in concert. Heartstrings form verbal music . Wiggling toes help us decipher words. Most memorable to me is the following: Tears and smiles are torn from metaphors and similes, eg a vocal symphony.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. I am not a professional editor or critic. My comments are my opinions only.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi DJ! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the life of a great woman, Harriet Tubman.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The Civil War ended and Harriet Tubman had to take care of her people who lived a lifetime of structure and. couldn't change with the words, "You are free." She invited her people into her home...the elderly, the sick and dying, the bloodied children. Most memorable to me is the following: Harriet said, "I am a warm blanket, a North Star, guiding people, a mother, a father, a friend, Harriet.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. I am not a professional editor or critic. My opinions are just opinions.

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Review of Paragliding  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Fyn! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about riding a para-glider to the delight of the poet.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The paraglider glides in silence. Silence makes minutia out of the silken sail. The paraglider is the king of the sky, yet tiny in the grand scheme of things. Most memorable to me is the following: Currents and liquid air move the para-glider toward the inevitable, the direction dictated by Winds and liquid air.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, and they are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. I am not a professional editor or critic. What is stated in my review are opinions only.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Fivesixer! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the poet's promise that he will not let love get the best of him again.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet says their evil is pure. Does this mean there is no good in it? He says he is no saint, but others are worse than he is. ZHe wants to know when his love became a revolving door. Her smile and touches are real and secure and he may never live up to what she had in store for him. The future may hold Thanksgiving or it may be dissatisfied cravings. Most memorable to me is the following: I will not look heartbreak in the eyes anymore. He will also not look heartbreak in her eyes anymore.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout the free verse poem.

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Review of Affected  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Elisa! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the poet's angst.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Each day the poet thinks about the sweetness of each.. She wanders through her life distracted. Each one brings a different kind of confusion. The embrace repeats. Why is this? She's fallen. Is it because the poet wondered? She tries not to repeat mistakes. Most memorable to me is the following: Their touches seem innocent, yet they wreck her when she shouldn't wonder at all..

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout poem of unmetered lines,
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Review of Much  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Jimminycritic! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about poetry and the effect a broken life has on a poem if you have a sense of humor.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
I had to read your poem several times before I could capture the essence of it. I enjoy the jigsaw puzzle approach to this kind of poem. It states that poetry can be broken when it's about a person's life. In this case about the poet's life is broken and the poetry is broken too. Most memorable to me is the following: It's no small wonder that it should be broken, just like the poet's life.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Delightful free verse poem, unrhymed and unmetered. Your name is mighty clever! I almost read jimminycricket.

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Review of This, For You  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jace! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem was written for the poet's friend's wedding.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet feels his friends' love can't be wrong. The male partner says his love doesn't fear. The ring is a symbol of love hence. It speaks of love to the woman. Silent dreams may fade. Shared dreams will come true. "'This, for you." Most memorable to me is the following: The song in the poet's heart says the wedding couple will never part.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Lovely imagery, eg kiss of the sun's warmth and the symbolism of the ring. Rhyme pattern is present with AaBb in the verses and ABab in the bridge. This is a very lovely poem.

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Review of Dystopian Tree  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Timothy! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about bullying told from a unique perspective.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The small branch of the broken tree is trapped where it is not free. The stinging words of the Banshee are heard. One branch tries not to splinter. memorable to me is the following: It's a matter of time before the branches of the broken tree fade away.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Effective use of personification. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout poem of unmetered lines.

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Review of One Less  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Five sizer! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the poet not wanting to fall in love anymore.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
An angel wins the poet's heart over the poet's head.whenever he gets too close to thinking. The poet feels the angel is a trap. Most memorable to me is the following: One angel always wins the prize the poet would never give away.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout the poem.

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Review of Forever  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Fhionnuisce! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is written for the poet's wife.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
When God's stars are cinders and the Earth is cold, the poet's and partner's love shall remain aflame. Most memorable to me is the following: It is an undying tribute, dear love's vigil light.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review of Galleys  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi HuntersMoon! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the seasons of the year.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Spring ripens with color, nature's scullery. Most memorable to me is the following: sudden downpour and dark green song to forest's fall of moss covered bed.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.
Thank you for sharing.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ms. CaseyLuna! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about change, which can happen in a snap.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The world stopped when the poet's lover's footsteps walked away from him. Tears ran down his face. Most memorable to me is the following: A small box slipped out of his hand and landed next to the first of the tears yet to come.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review of I Want You Baby  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Michael! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the poet's attraction for a woman.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet's lover has promised one night without fighting. He is obsessed with making sweet love to her all night. Most memorable to me is the following: "I know we can be good friends in time".

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I was not distracted by errors in. usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about waking up and not being able to forget the past.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
In the early morning the poet experiences peaceful silence. Some days she wakes up and is not able to forget the past. Most memorable to me is the following: Memories can be unforgiving.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review of One last time  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi GirlyPinkly! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a tribute to the poet's spouse's grandmother, who passed away after battling cancer.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Let her soul fly after immense pain and bleeding. To touch her small hands is happiness. Just one more joke to crack. Most memorable to me is the following: "Wisdom spun whenever I get to talk to her." I can imagine spinning wisdom. The elderly possess a great deal of wisdom.

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I was not distracted by errors in usag, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. I think you meant tension, not tenses.

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Review of Kennedy  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Michael! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the assassination of John F. Kennedy.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The government said Lee acted alone. Not one gun did he own. The man in front of John Kennedy saw him fall. Lee was shot dead. JFK's children grew up with no dad. Most memorable to me is the following: Americalost a favorite son for a war that was never won.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi HuntersMoon! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes a canoeing trip to the Bahamas.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Canoeing at the Bahamas called for real adventure. The poet's spirit didn't notice the darkening horizon and then rain lashing at him. The canoe went backwards and threw him into darkness. He awakened and noticed trees turning from green to dark red,. The poet made a distress call.. Most memorable to me is the following: He was told he had been marooned. Is there sequel to this flash fiction? What next?

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to worried should be too worried.

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Review of Splash  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi WakeUp! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about taking a bath in a memorable way!

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Nothing like having fun while getting clean as a whistle! And Mom appreciates you. That's why she sits with you to make sure you're careful while you clean. Most memorable to me is the following: Then splatter til your heart's content. I can remember painting the bathtub with colored soaps! That's the only time I got away with such a thing.

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Review of Splash  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-{/b
Most memorable to me is the following:

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and they are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review by GerMac
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*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about

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Most memorable to me is the following:

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and they are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review of Milkman Academy  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Winklett! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the educational program at Milkman Academy.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
These Milkman Academy components willnot be forgotten. You need a moo, milk, rake and brush to work with the cow. Feed pigs mush. Count fresh laid eggs for your math assignment. Music...chicks peeping; History...milkman' tales; Literature...sleep; Science...foal's first breath; Gym class...all day long; Detention...dirty chore; Farm justice...for defiance; Writing...paws, hoof and ink. Most memorable to me is the following: Poetry is sweet, warm milk to drink.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are mentioned, they go unnoticed. Nice rhyme pattern.

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Review of Far Away Friend  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Cubby! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the use of parallismus membrorum in a long distance friendship.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet sees your face through words. The poet relates that they may ne'er meet. Most memorable to me is the following: A far away friend is close to her heart.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are mentioned, they go unnoticed. Parallel structure using antithesis is effective. I use this approach myself and like it because it is quite subtle.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac


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#1300305 by Maryann


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Review of Disappointment  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Shopgirl1739! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the fruitless search for perfection.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Why do you apply force and try to control the perfection you seek? It is beyond your reach somehow and just short of your ideal. Most memorable to me is the following: Open your eyes and see with your heart. It's been here a long time. Why keep searching for perfection?

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout poem.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac


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#1300305 by Maryann


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Review of Devils Lust  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tonny! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about an instant attraction.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Our eyes meet across the room. Our paths collide. Attraction is locked and feeling is mutual. We were meant to meet. Most memorable to me is the following: Tonight is all that matters despite life long relations.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. In your title Devils should be Devil's. Rhyme is sprinkled through poem.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac


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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Michael! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your songs, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This song is about the September 11, 2001 incident of terrorists in our country.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
A September explosion caused emotion. They searched through debris to find bodies. Is killing us a remedy? What wrong have we done? We're about to go to war for a man who lies. Most memorable to me is the following: There is no reason for such hate.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. There is a good rhyme pattern.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac


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