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Review of Granite Glory  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi DyrHearte! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you on your anniversary with a review of one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes the poet's desire to grasp self-worth with one small success at a time by ridding himself of dependence.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: "I am by myself. I share my moment of victory with wind, rock and sky. In my victory I weep". The poet removes his ring, trying to rid himself of dependence. but he can't. The poet is now ready to give her up though. "I can see my future before me. Standing here I can see forever.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Rhyme sprinkled throughout poem of unmetered lines.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Cheri! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you on your anniversary with a review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes some of the fears of cancer.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Injections cause flush and light headedness, fear and dread. Hope is gone. There are many people to see who are dependent on you. Most memorable to me is the following: The rain has an impatient rhythm just like sadness and indecision.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Good rhyme pattern in poem of unmetered lines.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Muse  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the poet's muse and writing experience.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
You speak of your muse helping you put your fear to rest. She wanted you to sleep for the night. Most memorable to me is the following: She never came back and you lit a fire. All of your work burned to the ground and your spirit died that day.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. There is a rhyming pattern and unmetered lines.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of the tree  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Knight Life! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you on your anniversary with a review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem provides a canvas to paint a picture of God's creation of the world.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
I knew I was in for a treat when you spoke of God's placing a mountain a little to the right. There was a path for lovers. Most memorable to me is the following: God stopped like an artist fashioning a tree that was His pieste de resistance. He made a tree with more love than the others had in order to give mankind some grace. His son would be the answer to sin's plan. He hoped His son would not see the tear He shed.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Excellent imagery with rhyme sprinkled throughout poem of unmetered lines. Suggestion: sins plan should be sin's plan.

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Review of place of peace  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Song Bird! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you on your anniversary and to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes a peaceful place.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-{/b
The smell of flowers fills the air. A shallow river flows by. It is steps from the gazebo to the river. This is home for some. Most memorable to me is the following: From the trees soft light touches the ground.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Mother  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi knight life! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes the poet's Mother.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
You speaks of your mother has pure and caring, standing beside you even when you push her away. She comforted you when you had more tears than lakes had waves. Most memorable to me is the following: Mother is a constant in your life, in laughter or in pain,

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Suggestion: then waves should be than waves,

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Review of She Talks with Me  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Jay! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about growing up with dad present is a gift for father and daughter..

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
A dad feels honored when his 13-year-old daughter is still talking to him about the difficulties in life. Most memorable to me is the following: Dad is always happy to help in the times of great need, such as feminine times. He is greatly appreciated for his desire to help. Respect between father and daughter is growing.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.

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Review of Well-Earned Gold  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim! II am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about hard-earned money in any job.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: true and honest talent keeps us employed. You also need to recognize mistakes and how the boss reacts. Vitality and purpose and the ability to manage and do the detail work ends up in well-earned gold.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.

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Review of Goodbye  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about bonding with another.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: You and your partner had pain and shed tears, but everything changed when you two met. Together you two felt alive., but you never meet and bonded over time. Why do you say you and your partner met, when you didn't meet or did you mean you knew each other through texting? .

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation.

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Review of In Time  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Aries! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a canvas provided for a picture of time when in love.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Time stood still. There's not a memory where you weren't dancing in the dark. The poet speaks of his broken heart, stricken with grief. Now the sun has shown its face again. Most memorable to me is the following: "I love you now as I did then. God! I pray we meet again.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Imagery is pleasant.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi icanterbareback! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem provides a canvas for you to paint a description of the woman you want to be.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-{/b
Most memorable to me is the following: "But for now I'm in this body of someone I no longer know." Your poem says you wish you could have the chaos you used to have instead of sitting in comfort. You want to communicate with the woman in your reflection., but catching her is like harnessing the breeze. You can't cage her.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. Nice rhyme pattern in your unmetered poem. Imagery is very good.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about erring on the side of conservatism. Better safe than sorry.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: Any electrical outlet malfunction should be reported to thwart hazards if you want to be safe for tomorrow.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Notebook Memories  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Poole! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes bringing on the new and getting rid of the old, but is the old better or are there better ways than strictly new ways?

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: "...hoping to find an option more permanent." Your pen, an anchor of the past.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Rhyme is sprinkled through your poem in unmetered lines.

🐝Thank you for sharing.

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Review of World Peace  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about world peace.


*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
If you let the more treacherous dog out, you have world peace more at risk. If you let the cat in, the less harmful cat might have the desire to take on the pit bull, usually the more treacherous animal, but society is more protected because the two are in an enclosure. Most memorable to me is the following: "They set on their haunches gazing into each other's eyes waiting for someone to open the gate..."

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Rhyme sprinkled throughout poem of unmetered lines.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi HuntersMoon! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a canvas to paint a picture of St. Nicholas and Christmas in July.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
St. Nicholas spent his fortune on comforting the poor and needy and teaching us that it's not what we give that counts. It's the spirit in which we give it. Most memorable to me is the following: We should all embrace his spirit of spreading joy and happiness.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Rhyme pattern in lines 2 and 4 of each stanza with good word flow.

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Review of The Silver Thread  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Bob County! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes a study of subconscious symbolism.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
As you sleep you grip a silver thread. As you climb toward a companion, the silver thread vibrates in a low pitch. Most memorable to me is the following: You need to awaken from your nightmare and wear your face again and find the windows of your eyes. A companion clutches you. Everything is now okay.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem of unmetered lines.

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Review of Rearranged  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi I HuntersMoon! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes your senior experience.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Times passage you've measured like the rings you've counted on a tree. You now compare youth and age. You used to wear your hair long. Now all you have is hair on your cheeks and lips. You used to dance all night. Now you spend all your time looking for a handicapped parking place. This is just a beginning! memorable to me is the following. Your mind isn't deranged. It's re-arranged.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Very nice rhyme pattern and good word flow and simile.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Jay! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your pieces, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This piece describes your love of tea time and your desire to travel in the British Isles.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-{/b
The word "sweltering" is understood in the summer heat of the South. That's when iced sweet tea is served. Most memorable to me is the following: Earl Grey tea is recently getting competition from Twinings orange and cinnamon spice Christmas tea. You might be interested to travel to Britain for a trip to Twinings on the Strand for tea time, among other places.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
For the most part I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Suggestions: Use quotation marks around the word "sweltering". Use disembark from the plane NOT disembark the plane.

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Review of The Lost Soul  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Rob! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes your one true desire is to learn the truth of who you are.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
You say you are searching, for what you do not know. Most memorable to me is the following: "I pray I find my one true self." A shimmer of light gives hope, but you feel you will soon meet your maker.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Rhyme is sprinkled through your poem. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes what it takes to be part of a team.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The game win might be within reach and you might be lucky to play,. You don't want your chances and efforts to slip away. Most memorable to me is the following: hard work, dedication, practice, and humor indicate you love the game.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Intuitive WhiteWalkers! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes a dreamland, an adventure where Anshel appears in your dreams and battles evil.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: "A being of bold stature stood glowing in its own light..." Anshel is the bold creature who saves mankind from evil. He helps you in your dreams.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Rhyme is sprinkled through poem. Nice flow of words.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Prosperous Snow (Neva)! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes the importance of music in society.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Love songs meet the light of distant stars. We love only the moments when music rises from our souls and out of our spirit's desire to live. Most memorable to me is the following: If all pursue wealth and power, who will be left to sing the songs and writ the odes?

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Nice imagery, eg light of distant stars. Rhyme is sprinkled through your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jeannie! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes a woman's experience with her fancy long lemony Cadillac one night.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Driving around in your Cadillac was like a nightmare with all the stares you got from the young men. You then realized you had ended up a hundred miles from Madellia, your home town. You decided you'd stay home and be happy about it after that incident. Most memorable to me is the following: I can understand your desire to stay close to home.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.
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Review of Coyote Waits  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
H Turtlei I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a coyote's cunning and setting of traps.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The coyote has an instinct to feed.i Most memorable to me is the following: This is only an instinct. He knows his target and chooses carefully.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Unrhymed and unmetered verse.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Dr. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem speaks about how the memories of certain people haunt us.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
There is no use pretending you can forget memories that haunt you because one memory brings on another one. We often forget to love our own flesh and blood. I have never understood how some people ca ignore their own family members, both close and distant family. Most memorable to me is the following: You might not be able to stop memories of others that haunt you, but you can love those around you presently.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar, or punctuation. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem of unmetered lines.

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