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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a good friend.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Since meeting we have helped each other overcome fears and hatred. Most memorable to me is the following: We'll praise God together. He approves of our friendship.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, which states that errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not noticed.
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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Rhychus! ! am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a bad philosophy of lies.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Lies are "a poor lamp to light the way". Most memorable to me is the following: Lies are "cobblestones that pave the ugliest road to hell".

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This.comment is a disclosure, stating that errors are not obvious in that they are not seen if they exist, Some nice imagery, eg "a poor lamp to light the way". Rhyme pattern is good.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Carly! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about Christmas surprises and anticipation.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Anticipation of gifts is a source of happiness at Christmas. Each face alights with pleasure. Most memorable to me is the following: Some savor their gifts; others rip them apart.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure because errors if they exist were not noticed and are not obvious. Unrhymed, unmetered free verse poem.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi White Walkers Rise! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the high cost of life's small crises,

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The plumber got lost, was late, the washing machine flooded, washed the cat who screeched and ran. Plumber arrived but more damage was already done. Most memorable to me is the following: "That'll be $350 please.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors are not obvious, even if they exist, I didn't see them. Free verse.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about love and dating online.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
He proposes a date. She's looking for her soulmate. Most memorable to me is the following: Life is a challenge, but so is love.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors are not obvious because, even if they exist, I did not see them. There is a rhyme pattern and a good flow of words.

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Review of Imagination  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about wishes, magic and staying young.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Believe in magic and stay young. When we first started watching the stars in the sky, we were young and free. We were innocent and had our dreams and imagination. If you truly believe, your wish will come true. Most memorable to me is the following: Why not sleep under the sky?

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors are not obvious because, even if they exist, I didn't see them. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem of unmetered lines.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi IntuitiveWhiteWalkers! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about taking care of one another.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
End unnecessary harshness with others. Single out someone in need. Keep a helpful and caring heart. Most memorable to me is the following: "Help is only a person away."

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors are not obvious because even if they exist, I didn't see them.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about living life and being happy despite pain or loss.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Scary times in childhood and adulthood can be caused by layoffs and death. Even so share a laugh. Most memorable to me is the following: Laugh and forgive.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors if they exist are not obvious because I did not see them.

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Review of Home Fires  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Dave! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about celebrating the homecoming of family members at Christmas..

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: Christmas celebration is all about having loved ones at home, especially those you have anguished over.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure which states that if there are errors, they are not obvious because you did not see them. I feel this poem should be put to lyrics and a musical tune. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem.

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Review of Morning Sunlight  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Girls white! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about letting the morning sun infuse you.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Keep the good from yesterday in a special place. Be peaceful. Whisper your dream to the universe. Most memorable to me is the following: The morning sun brings hope and a new day.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure and states if there are errors, they are not obvious because I do not see them. Very nice imagery. Very good rhyme pattern.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about Christian love and the color of the soul, blue.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Dawn in the early morning is soulful across the planet. Most memorable to me is the following: "Azure waves washing On the shores of paradise Sing of divine love". This is a perfect description. Each time you read this line you are a little more admiring of it. Beautiful description of Christian love.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar, or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure and states that if there are errors, they are not obvious because I did not see them. Lovely senyru form and imagery and personification.

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Review of Patience  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Survivor48! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the use of time and patience..

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
A false perception of time becomes stressful when you believe it goes too slow. Most memorable to me is the following: Time moving too slow begs the experience to end quickly. Just like dreaming of Christmas, wanting it to be here, you end up wishing your life away. Irritation causes impatience as the fumes burn tolerance.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar, or punctuation; this comment is a disclosure which states that if there were errors, they are not obvious because I didn't see them. Some nice imagery. Well written.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of IMPORTANT!  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Angus!  I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your stories., Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This story! is about an elderly gentleman who loses a photo of a cottage which is frozen in time.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
A man wallked out of a library and noticed something fell out of an elderly man's pocket. The elderly man boarded a bus.. The man picked up the item and the word Important was written on the back of a photo. Later that day the man was jogging and noticed a cottage that looked identical to the cottage on the photo. He knocked on the door and the elderly man invited him in. Most memorable to me is the following: When the man asked him why the word important was written on the photo, the elderly man told him he was lonely. The cottage was frozen in time and now the jogger was trapped in the cottage too, just like the elderly man was. This is one way to have your choice of friends.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation; this comment is a disclosure that if there are any errors, they are not obvious because I didn't see them. Well written story.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a man who never believed in war.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The bugler sounds a mournful tune. The man was a brave man but put to rest over a land dispute. He joined his wife after death, their love you can't dilute. Most memorable to me is the following: He sought to help others and didn't lie, that none could refute. He was a peaceful man who loved to strum the lute.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation; this statement is a disclosure, saying if there were errors, they are not obvious becasuse I did not see them. This rondeau form poem is one of my favorites. Nice rhyme pattern and smooth flow of words.

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Review of She  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Turtle! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a love poem written for the poet's wife.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
In a plastic world of people, houses and cars you are very appreciative of your wife's desire to cling to the simple things of life. You might have your small or large disagreements, but you are a testament to the strength of your love. Even in the beginning you fell hard for her essence. Most memorable to me is the followingg: "...she is more beautiful today than she was the day we met." Your poem is a lovely tribute to your relationship.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation; this is a disclosure, stating that if there are any errors, they are not obvious because I did not see them. This free verse poem has a smooth flow of words and it is well-written.

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Review of Imaginary Friends  
Review by GerMac
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Hi Frosty Lorraine! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for your birthday anniversary, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about imaginary friends.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Your poem speaks of the limitations of some imaginary friends, eg, they can't drink tea. It also speaks of contributions they can give you, such as listening. Most memorable to me is the following: Some can be there when no one else is.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Free verse poem.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Jay! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about celebrating your marriage of 30 years on your August anniversary.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
You have been fascinated with your wife all these years. Even though there have been some ups and downs, our Lord has sent you new hope with love, careers and a child after 17 years, With life changes by grace you have taken tests. Most memorable to me is the following: "But had again this path to take 'twould be my lasting song..."

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar and punctuation. Nice rhyme pattern and flow of words. Interesting use of word order.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about fast cars and racey women.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
A young man fascinated with racey cars and fast women makes a play for an older woman. He tells her he can audition her and get her a supporting role if she'll pose nude for him. He takes things a little too far. Most memorable to me is the following: She escapes from the bathroom and hot wires his car. Was there ever an intent to be an actress?

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Good rhyme pattern throughout.

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Review of Love Lost  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Purple Queen! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a love lost.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Your lover went out into the night and lost his life. Now you grieve all day every day. Most memorable to me is the following: Your lover gave you love eternally. He gave you happiness and the ability to be yourself.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.

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Review of Hear The Storm  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Fen! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about being natural and genuine.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Get your heart, dust it until it shines. The poet can now speak with genuineness. Most memorable to me is the following: Your partner is the Thunder and you are the Lightning. You are excited that your partner knows who he is. He does everything naturally.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Some twenty trees were mentioned. They all had a role to play from the palm tree that welcomes you to the oak tree that said goodbye to you, and the most important message came from the willow. Most memorable to me is the following: The willow seeped and cried for each tree that is cut down. You should think about expanding on the willow's message in your poem.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. Good rhyme pattern in your poem of unmetered lines. Use of personification is interesting.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your pieces, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This piece is about a limited lifetime offer.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-have
Other people obstruct or support you. In life. You are responsible for their presence or absence at any time. The universe is held blameless for your emotional well-being.. Life is a limited time offer with no warranties. If desired, sign up for another subscription. From The Management. This is quite a business arrangement and quite accurate. Most memorable to me is the following: You're responsible for your own action or inaction in your lifetime,

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.

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Review of Time flies  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about pondering the years you left behind.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: If you could re-write time, you'd throw your watch and not look back. Your tears would be a sign of freedom.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac


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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Carly! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a tribute to friends and writing.com.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Writers from around gather on writing.com, inspiring each other, gathering like-minded to reach new heights. Most memorable to me is the following: On Writing.com we motivate each other to grow as writers and friends.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors language usage, grammar or punctuation.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac


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Review of Snowflake Screams  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Turtle! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about nature in the natural world we cannot perceive.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
We do not understand the beauty, violence, innocence and wisdom of our planet. Most memorable to me is the following: Snowflakes hit water at frequencies too high for us to hear. Fish can hear and understand. We admire, but we're oblivious. Wy are we the ones to judge?

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, gramma or punctuation. Suggestions: can not should be cannot.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac


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