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Review by GerMac
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Vanilla fire! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you for your your account anniversary with a ureview one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the meaning of silence gives consent.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The ideal response usually comes after the incident. Just say no! Fear, panic and tears brought about her ineffectiveness. Blame doesn't come from absence of verbal disagreement. Most memorable to me is the following: "Silence gives consent."

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stjating errors are not obvious. If they exist. And are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review of in the aftermath  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Rhyssa! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you for your account anniversary with a review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the poet and lover being together yet apart.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Anger is spoken in daggers. They wound and scar. IThe poet wants his arm around her to warm and ward off tears. There are echoes of untamed truths. Any certainty of the poet's love or worth is drowned. Most memorable to me is the following: "We sit wrapped in toxic silence."

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Some nice imagery, eg spoken in daggers. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout the poem.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi. G.B. Williams! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about growing old.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Growing old, according to the poet is not much fun. Your heart and mind are occupied with that thought all day long. Life is catching up with you on the run, especially your aches and pains. Most memorable to me is the following: Your days are numbered and the grandkids are still very young.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not mentioned and they go unnoticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Carly! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about happiness which brings an emotional and spiritual connection to the world.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Writing paints the poet's life and steadies her as she plays. Walks in nature's grand cathedral give her joy and contentment. Most memorable to me is the following: Writing keeps her from aimlessness. She finds a purpose in connecting...happiness outside and love inside.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Some nice imagery, eg nature's grand cathedral. There is a rhyme pattern.

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Review of Member of One  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a friendship or lack of one.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
What is the cost of friendship? Why not keep a friend forever? Life slips by the poet. IThere is no shoulder to lean on when he feels he can't do it on his own. Most memorable to me is the following: In the past the poet relied on himself to get things done.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating if any errors exist, they are not obvious. If they aren't mentioned they go unnoticed.

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Review of September  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
September thoughts are somber, encouraged by childhood memories. The episodes grow darker with time. Most memorable to me is the following: Like bitter strawberries eaten before fully ripe. This thought leaves a lingering bitterness on my tongue.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar, or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review of Love Song  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Max! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today for your account anniversary to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a love ballad.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The lovers longed o dispose of that great distance between the two of them. He was drawn to her beauty. Aging had no mercy. He missed her They're now alone and his heart is steel. Most memorable to me is the following: He invited her to stroll in the tres where they first met.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating if they exist, errors are not obvious. If they are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. There is a pattern of rhyme in this anapestic tetra meter ballad. Nice imagery, eg his heart is steel.

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Review of Lest We Forget  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Winnie! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you for your anniversary with a review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a cherished bond formed September 11, 2001.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
September 11, 2001 is a day to remember in poetic form. This ode was written to remind us of the towers in New York City that didn't stand. Most memorable to me is the following: "Born from the dust, a seed was sown, uniting this great land. A bond began and courage rescued man. Hatred went away.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors were not obvious. If any existed, and not mentioned, they went unnoticed. Lovely rhyme pattern and ode. Imagery and personification. is effective, eg born from dust, a seed was sown.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Forever Texan! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you for your account anniversary with a review of one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a love that showed up when you least expected it with plans of its own.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet and his friend were looking for understanding. They shared their hopes and fears and broken heart. They went from laughter to understanding to friendship to emotions and began trusting. Most memorable to me is the following: They believed it was safe to trust and love again. Without knowing it, he fell in love with her when he wasn't looking.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

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Review of Old Man Sonnet...  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Bella Bunny! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you for your account anniversary with a review of one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the downhill side of life...50th birthday.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The "Big Event" is a known roast...the poet's spouse's 50th birthday. Welcome to the celebration of old man jokes, canes, dentures, Depends and senility. A warning that he's past his prime is issued. Most memorable to me is the following: He's past his prime with hair falling out, molded gums. The poet feels she should careful of what she does. Soon she'll be 50 too!

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed. Rhyme pattern is lovely in this Shakespeare sonnet.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Chrisdaltro! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you for your account anniversary with a review of one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a lost love and missing him so much.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Are there afterlives? The poet feel she is just breathing and can't remember if they ever hugged. Her arms are now empty and cold as Amber. Fate called long distance. Most memorable to me is the following: "There is no kind of soft consolation. He is gone; are there afterlives?"

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist, and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Borrowed time  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Just an Ordinary Jyo! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you for your account anniversary with a review of one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a memory from the past.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
You end your poem with an unexpected twist that is very astute. More about that as part of the most memorable to me. You speak of a memory being like a pressed flower, carefully preserved. It is arrested in time at the expense of detail and painted in hues never endowed on it before. Its shape and proportion are distorted. Most memorable to me is the following: Do not dwell in the past because memories are deceptive.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation.This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. Some very nice imagery. I like your similes, eg a memory is like a pressed flower.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Turtle! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your sonnets, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This sonnet is aboutsearching the face of God.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Our hearts tell us to search the face of God. and about nature, earth and divine. Knowledge is the goal. Most memorable to me is the following: If we never question and search, how do we find power hidden in the human mind?

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The princess wouldn''t marry an old wizard so he cast a spell on her live Panther. He became a pewter panther in a store in France. The curse was broken by thunder and the panther became a live animal again and escaped to her mansion. He crept up the stairs and found her. She cried in his fur. Most memorable to me is the following: She, her spouse and the live panther lived happily ever after.

e:pencil}-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. In Stanza 2 it's should be its.

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#1300305 by Maryann
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Review of BURDEN OF THEFT  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your articles. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This article is about how thievery at the grass roots in society affects public office a at higher levels and eventually affects us all.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Money given for medicine and roads is being stolen by thieves in society. The people need to renounce the devil and evil in society. Most memorable to me is the following: God will offer you an opportunity to turn away from evil to change thieves in society,

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious and they go unnoticed.

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Review of For You  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Rusty! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This Is a love poem.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet's lover makes him whole, she has captured both his heart and soul. The poet would climb the highest peak for her. Most memorable to me is the following: The poet's lover gives him strength and care. He longs for, cries for, fights for and would die for her.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar of punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed.

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Review of The Mirror's Gaze  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a man's thoughts of himself.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet confesses he has recent and past insecurities, fear and failure. He thinks he is a needy fool and has much self-pity and distrust. Most memorable to me is the following: "...My passionate caring for my fellow human beings" would show the poet's intentions of trust. His meticulous soul would gain love for him.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar and punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Schnujo! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the animals of the forest and peacefulness among them.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Mrs. Fox was worried that her carrot cake wouldn't be protected by Sam Rabbit. Sam Rabbit wasn't just any rabbit. He was a sheriff and he wanted her trust. Most memorable to me Bunnies are real peace makers. Life could get out of hand in the forest if they weren't peaceful creatures.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. They aren't obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a love poem of elegance.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet's lover's kindness and consideration reserved for family and friends has an elegance. Most memorable to me is the following: A gifted truth of your oneness with your lover is God given for eternity.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed. Your prose poem is well written.

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Review of I Still Remember  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ms. Casey Luna! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your pieces, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This piece is about a love encounter which didn't overcome distance.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
All those magical things, the dances, gifts, kisses, were symbols of their love. He even cried when she left. Most memorable to.me is the following: The writer feels the two can overcome distance, but he also said he doesn't love the poet anymore. She isn't the reason now.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar and punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. Errors, if they exist, go unnoticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi HuntersMoon. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a ballad about a boy and girl meeting.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet would like a friend, not a hero. You're just wasting her time. The poet can't remember your name. Chorus: In a world without your song, I wouldn't notice that it's gone. Most memorable to me is the following: You're easy to forget.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar and punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed. Nice rhyme pattern.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Princess Megan! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about Jane Austen and her writings.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
I am fascinated with how romance and love brings out the goodness in Jan Austen's characters, especially the men. Who would know Elizabeth's love of Mr. Darcy could change him into a caring human being in Pride and Prejudice. . And such moral fiber that a young man falls in love and his father doesn't approve of the woman, so the young man gives up his inheritance to be with this woman. Most memorable to me is the following: Jane Austen never found the love of her life, but loved her characters and found happiness in them.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are in obvious. If they exist they go unnoticed.

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Review of A poem for Chance  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kit tiara! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a sickly kitten that grew up to be strong and friendly.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
As a kitten Chance had poor health and was a tiny kitty cat. As a fully grown cat he is strong and not afraid of anything and he's friendly too. Most memorable to me is the following: The poet named him Chance because she hoped he had a chance.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not noticed. There is a rhyme pattern.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac


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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about seasonal depression on holidays.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet feels Christmas is made up of self-pity, not love. He explains the negative side of snow: It's icy and he shivers, still. Most memorable to me is the following: It's only seasonal depression.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac


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Review of Wash Away  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Lani! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a prayer of forgiveness.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet asked, "Am I forgiven? Does Jesus love me?" "Wash away is what I did." Most memorable to me is the following: Jesus said, "I give you a new heart, free of stain, sin and guilt."

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac


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