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Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The princess wouldn''t marry an old wizard so he cast a spell on her live Panther. He became a pewter panther in a store in France. The curse was broken by thunder and the panther became a live animal again and escaped to her mansion. He crept up the stairs and found her. She cried in his fur. Most memorable to me is the following: She, her spouse and the live panther lived happily ever after.

e:pencil}-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they go unnoticed. In Stanza 2 it's should be its.

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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your articles. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This article is about how thievery at the grass roots in society affects public office a at higher levels and eventually affects us all.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Money given for medicine and roads is being stolen by thieves in society. The people need to renounce the devil and evil in society. Most memorable to me is the following: God will offer you an opportunity to turn away from evil to change thieves in society,

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious and they go unnoticed.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Rusty! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This Is a love poem.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet's lover makes him whole, she has captured both his heart and soul. The poet would climb the highest peak for her. Most memorable to me is the following: The poet's lover gives him strength and care. He longs for, cries for, fights for and would die for her.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar of punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a man's thoughts of himself.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet confesses he has recent and past insecurities, fear and failure. He thinks he is a needy fool and has much self-pity and distrust. Most memorable to me is the following: "...My passionate caring for my fellow human beings" would show the poet's intentions of trust. His meticulous soul would gain love for him.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar and punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed.

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Schnujo! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the animals of the forest and peacefulness among them.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Mrs. Fox was worried that her carrot cake wouldn't be protected by Sam Rabbit. Sam Rabbit wasn't just any rabbit. He was a sheriff and he wanted her trust. Most memorable to me Bunnies are real peace makers. Life could get out of hand in the forest if they weren't peaceful creatures.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. They aren't obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a love poem of elegance.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet's lover's kindness and consideration reserved for family and friends has an elegance. Most memorable to me is the following: A gifted truth of your oneness with your lover is God given for eternity.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed. Your prose poem is well written.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ms. Casey Luna! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your pieces, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This piece is about a love encounter which didn't overcome distance.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
All those magical things, the dances, gifts, kisses, were symbols of their love. He even cried when she left. Most memorable to.me is the following: The writer feels the two can overcome distance, but he also said he doesn't love the poet anymore. She isn't the reason now.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar and punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are not obvious. Errors, if they exist, go unnoticed.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi HuntersMoon. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a ballad about a boy and girl meeting.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet would like a friend, not a hero. You're just wasting her time. The poet can't remember your name. Chorus: In a world without your song, I wouldn't notice that it's gone. Most memorable to me is the following: You're easy to forget.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar and punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating any errors are not obvious. If they exist, they go unnoticed. Nice rhyme pattern.

Thank you for sharing.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Princess Megan! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about Jane Austen and her writings.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
I am fascinated with how romance and love brings out the goodness in Jan Austen's characters, especially the men. Who would know Elizabeth's love of Mr. Darcy could change him into a caring human being in Pride and Prejudice. . And such moral fiber that a young man falls in love and his father doesn't approve of the woman, so the young man gives up his inheritance to be with this woman. Most memorable to me is the following: Jane Austen never found the love of her life, but loved her characters and found happiness in them.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Any errors are in obvious. If they exist they go unnoticed.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kit tiara! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a sickly kitten that grew up to be strong and friendly.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
As a kitten Chance had poor health and was a tiny kitty cat. As a fully grown cat he is strong and not afraid of anything and he's friendly too. Most memorable to me is the following: The poet named him Chance because she hoped he had a chance.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not noticed. There is a rhyme pattern.

Thank you for sharing.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about seasonal depression on holidays.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet feels Christmas is made up of self-pity, not love. He explains the negative side of snow: It's icy and he shivers, still. Most memorable to me is the following: It's only seasonal depression.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not noticed.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Lani! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a prayer of forgiveness.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The poet asked, "Am I forgiven? Does Jesus love me?" "Wash away is what I did." Most memorable to me is the following: Jesus said, "I give you a new heart, free of stain, sin and guilt."

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure. Errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not noticed.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a good friend.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Since meeting we have helped each other overcome fears and hatred. Most memorable to me is the following: We'll praise God together. He approves of our friendship.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, which states that errors are not obvious. If they exist, they are not noticed.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Rhychus! ! am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about a bad philosophy of lies.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Lies are "a poor lamp to light the way". Most memorable to me is the following: Lies are "cobblestones that pave the ugliest road to hell".

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This.comment is a disclosure, stating that errors are not obvious in that they are not seen if they exist, Some nice imagery, eg "a poor lamp to light the way". Rhyme pattern is good.

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Carly! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about Christmas surprises and anticipation.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Anticipation of gifts is a source of happiness at Christmas. Each face alights with pleasure. Most memorable to me is the following: Some savor their gifts; others rip them apart.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure because errors if they exist were not noticed and are not obvious. Unrhymed, unmetered free verse poem.

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi White Walkers Rise! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the high cost of life's small crises,

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
The plumber got lost, was late, the washing machine flooded, washed the cat who screeched and ran. Plumber arrived but more damage was already done. Most memorable to me is the following: "That'll be $350 please.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors are not obvious, even if they exist, I didn't see them. Free verse.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about love and dating online.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
He proposes a date. She's looking for her soulmate. Most memorable to me is the following: Life is a challenge, but so is love.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors are not obvious because, even if they exist, I did not see them. There is a rhyme pattern and a good flow of words.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about wishes, magic and staying young.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Believe in magic and stay young. When we first started watching the stars in the sky, we were young and free. We were innocent and had our dreams and imagination. If you truly believe, your wish will come true. Most memorable to me is the following: Why not sleep under the sky?

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors are not obvious because, even if they exist, I didn't see them. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem of unmetered lines.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi IntuitiveWhiteWalkers! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about taking care of one another.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
End unnecessary harshness with others. Single out someone in need. Keep a helpful and caring heart. Most memorable to me is the following: "Help is only a person away."

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors are not obvious because even if they exist, I didn't see them.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about living life and being happy despite pain or loss.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Scary times in childhood and adulthood can be caused by layoffs and death. Even so share a laugh. Most memorable to me is the following: Laugh and forgive.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure that errors if they exist are not obvious because I did not see them.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Dave! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about celebrating the homecoming of family members at Christmas..

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Most memorable to me is the following: Christmas celebration is all about having loved ones at home, especially those you have anguished over.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure which states that if there are errors, they are not obvious because you did not see them. I feel this poem should be put to lyrics and a musical tune. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem.

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Hi Girls white! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about letting the morning sun infuse you.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Keep the good from yesterday in a special place. Be peaceful. Whisper your dream to the universe. Most memorable to me is the following: The morning sun brings hope and a new day.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure and states if there are errors, they are not obvious because I do not see them. Very nice imagery. Very good rhyme pattern.

Thank you for sharing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about Christian love and the color of the soul, blue.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
Dawn in the early morning is soulful across the planet. Most memorable to me is the following: "Azure waves washing On the shores of paradise Sing of divine love". This is a perfect description. Each time you read this line you are a little more admiring of it. Beautiful description of Christian love.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar, or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure and states that if there are errors, they are not obvious because I did not see them. Lovely senyru form and imagery and personification.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Survivor48! I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is about the use of time and patience..

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
A false perception of time becomes stressful when you believe it goes too slow. Most memorable to me is the following: Time moving too slow begs the experience to end quickly. Just like dreaming of Christmas, wanting it to be here, you end up wishing your life away. Irritation causes impatience as the fumes burn tolerance.

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I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar, or punctuation; this comment is a disclosure which states that if there were errors, they are not obvious because I didn't see them. Some nice imagery. Well written.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of IMPORTANT!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Angus!  I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your stories., Please use my suggestions as you see fit. *Smile*

*Butterflyb*-- OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This story! is about an elderly gentleman who loses a photo of a cottage which is frozen in time.

*Idea*--THEME/CREATIVITY:-
A man wallked out of a library and noticed something fell out of an elderly man's pocket. The elderly man boarded a bus.. The man picked up the item and the word Important was written on the back of a photo. Later that day the man was jogging and noticed a cottage that looked identical to the cottage on the photo. He knocked on the door and the elderly man invited him in. Most memorable to me is the following: When the man asked him why the word important was written on the photo, the elderly man told him he was lonely. The cottage was frozen in time and now the jogger was trapped in the cottage too, just like the elderly man was. This is one way to have your choice of friends.

*Pencil*-- TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in usage, grammar or punctuation; this comment is a disclosure that if there are any errors, they are not obvious because I didn't see them. Well written story.

Thank you for sharing.

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