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I'm the lead editor for a small independent press, but I am on maternity leave for the next several years and thus not accepting submissions. I'll tell you my professional opinion on first chapters or short pieces and whether I would have accepted it or rejected it if I was looking for work. I've dealt most with controversial speculative fiction, and I'm most interested in polyamory a.k.a consensual non-monogamy.
Favorite Genres
Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Dystopia, Erotica
Least Favorite Genres
stream of consciousness
Favorite Item Types
Short Stories, Novels, Fraternal Polyandry
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (3.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Is this meant to be a test piece or a placeholder? I recommend drafting your story in a separate program such as MS Word, Open Office, or Google Docs and then copying and pasting it when you are ready to share it.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (3.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Is this meant to be a test piece or a placeholder? I recommend drafting your story in a separate program such as MS Word, Open Office, or Google Docs and then copying and pasting it when you are ready to share it.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of Fragile Doll  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thanks for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of Clepsydra  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start. I've always found science fiction intriguing.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. I've burned out on many things over the years.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thanks for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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Monthly contest for people who find joy in lewd things.
#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of cafe  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This brings me back to my university days. I didn't particularly enjoy cafés, but my ex-boyfriend kept insisting that I should hang out there to watch people and get a job as a barista. I think the asshole just wanted free coffee.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a delightful piece. It reads almost like a ballad.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of A LOT  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is an interesting perspective on lost love. I think we all experience it differently.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of Ripples  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You handled a difficult topic here in a proficient manner. Personally, I have not experienced physical abuse of this nature but rather endured verbal/emotional abuse from a partner as an adult. Thankfully, my parents were very supportive afterwards and I healed well.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of Collected  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This provides a lot of food for thought. Personally, I see that collecting works both ways. It can help all parties learn more about themselves and what they seek in partners. It takes a lot of time for some people to open up, and a piece of your collection may one day surprise you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of Pride  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a lovely heartfelt piece. Thanks for sharing these sentiments.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This story has a delightfully classic science fiction taste. I devoured stories like this when I was a teenager.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thanks for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
FORUM
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Monthly contest for people who find joy in lewd things.
#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of Illusion at Best  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This provides a lot of food for thought. It reminds me of a conversation I had a while back with someone else. Even if life is an illusion, I choose to enjoy it while I am here.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of Ink has adhd  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a delightfully thorough analysis. I have no idea who Ink is, but he seems to have captured the imaginations of many fans.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a cute poem with great rhymes. You could turn it into a song!

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Our species would not exist in its present form without romance, so your feelings are completely normal. Although it is no guarantee, romance is a good way to gain partnership with someone who will help us when we need it the most.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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Monthly contest for people who find joy in lewd things.
#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've used some impressive words here. Personally, I'm cis female, and I enjoy putting on makeup for special occasions, but I find it a waste of time and money to do so every day. This is part of the reason I prefer working from home, where I don't have to meet superficial standards and can focus more on actually performing my job.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a very uplifting story. Thanks for the encouragement!

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of What?  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This provides a lot of food for thought. Thanks for sharing this valuable piece.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of The phoenix  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thanks for sharing this epic legend.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is an amazing story. It is incredible what people will do for love.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is an intriguing concept.

I recommend getting a program that reads aloud to you for proofreading purposes. I use Natural Reader since I bought it many years ago, but these days, you can get tts programs for free or simply access them from your browser. Here is a nice, free one: https://ttsreader.com/

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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Review of EMILY'S SECRET  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start!

I recommend getting a program that reads aloud to you for proofreading purposes. I use Natural Reader since I bought it many years ago, but these days, you can get tts programs for free or simply access them from your browser. Here is a nice, free one: https://ttsreader.com/

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
FORUM
Lewd Poems Contest  (18+)
Monthly contest for people who find joy in lewd things.
#2250133 by K5Rakitan

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