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Review of Hope  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Cammy,
The title is great.
The chosen words/lines are very inspiring.
It is like a ray of light in a very dark clouded day.
The flow is perfect and the story behind the poetry is very touching.
The last three lines are my favorite lines.
Thank you for sharing "Hope"
Write On.
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877
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Silver Girl,
A story so full of fun and I like the way you presented it.
A very interesting character, Mrs.Roose.
I noticed the last line:
"This Is perfect"
Please change this to:
This is perfect.
I enjoy reading "The Librarian Who Loved Plants"
Write On.
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878
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Phedra,
There is a beautiful messge that this poem wishes to convey to your readers.
Yes, I agree..In life we know what is wrong and what is right, so why move wrongly ?
Thank you for sharing your talent through "The good and the bad"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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879
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings Judity,
A freedom that truly calls for a celebration.
Biographical and full of suspense.
This is the most wonderful feeling when you are enjoying such kind of freedom that you well-deserved.
Touching and full of lesson to learn and being shared to your readers.
This is well-written and well-presented.
Thank you for sharing "My Long Journey to Freedom"
Write On.
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880
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sparkle's Magic,
A poetry that describes a wonderful surrounding particularly the magical sea.
Very inviting and nicely written word.
It expresses fun and so inspiring especially the last two lines.
Thank you for sharing "The Magic That is This Place"
Write On.
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881
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello akaXxander,
The title is so intriguing and it also expresses a courageous spirit.
The poem has a good flow and it is also uniquely presented.
The lines at the last stanza speaks of positveness inspite of the horrible situation.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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882
Review of Heart  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello dogwood,
The poem that expresses the true feelings of the heart as far as lost relationship is concerned.
The story behind the poetry is full of drama as in a love story with a very unhappy ending.
The last line is the most convincing line of what is this all about.
Thank you for the read.
Write On.
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883
Review of We Knew  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello dogwood,
This is a story full of pain as in dark with all the drama of life.
A possible beginning of an interesting book to read.
A narrative and a convincing write.
Good luck for the continuation of this story.
Thank you for sharing "We Knew"
Write On.
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Review of Dying Man  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Cosmic Chameleon,
Yes it says everything and that everything is deeply emotional.
A very sentimental poem.
The sudden twist at the end made me admire mor eof your work.
My suggestion:
"when you wonderd if I cared"
Please change the word wonderd to...wonder
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of Heaven  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings to you tblaine,
A very captivating title.
The poem has a beautiful presentation.
I am happy for you that you are in Heaven as the philosophical message of this poem expresses.
Yes, I agree with the true feelings of the heart.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Heaven"
Write On.
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886
Review of The Twisted Heart  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Nick,
How sentimental is the story behind the poetry. Really an emotional piece.
"So I let him weep"
I believe it's the best decision as crying it out alsop means a great release.
Thank you for sharing your very touching "The Twisted Heart"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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887
Review of Jealousy  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Confused Poet.
A well-written short story.
The characterization, the plot and the flow is great.
The title fits for the chosen lines.
A love triangle and I can understand why.
She loves her, she loves another.
That hurts !
What happens next ?
Well, this can be a very good beginning of an interesting novel.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting,
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888
Review of Colander  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings to you Julius,
A poetry that is well-written and it has a philosophical message.
It expresses a relationship that was not harmonious.
Deep as in deep.
I have nothing to edit.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Colander"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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889
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Sticktalker,
I enjoy reading this.
Your sense of humor is so natural and this piece is very convincing especially when the title, I believe is truly
captivating.
Written with all candidness and sincereness and surely I can relate to what was written and certainly a lot of authors in this awesome community too.
Witty, and Fun !
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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890
Review of What is Hope?  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Becks Mitchell,
The title captures my interest as I am a firm believer of the word HOPE.
A very meaningful and touching poetry.
"Life spurs us on to greet tomorrow"
The wonderful last line that said it all.
CONGRATULATIONS for winning inthe bite size poetry contest.
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON.
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891
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Kiya,
A wonderful and meaningful tribute to two famous Hollywood artists.
The death of the beautiful Farrah Fawcet was not as shocking as the death of Michale Jackson but just the same, the world mourned for both of them.
Thank you for sharing "The Thrill Is Gone"
See you again in this awesome community.
GOD BLESS..
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892
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Dr. Taher,
The world was shocked of his death. Yes, we heard a lot about his controversial deeds that made him a bad man, like his famous song "Bad" but who is perfect in this world?
I respect the man because he contibuted so much in the music industry and he made a lot of people happy with
his very special talents, but I am not to judge his actions.
Good or bad, I believe the world mourns for his death and surely his Music will be missed not only in America but also here in my country the Philippines.
May his soul rest in peace.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to join in this forum and to pay a tribute to a great artist.
See you again in this awesome Writing.Com.
GOD BLESS..
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Review of Blindsided  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lance Phoenix,
A captivating title and a wonderful poetry.
It has a good rhyme and a good flow.
There is no grammatical error and no typo.
The lines at the last stanza are most meaningful and are my favorite lines.
I have nothing to edit.
Thank you for sharing your work.
WRITE ON.
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894
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Goodshot,
A combination of a mystery and a horror story at the same time.
Whew..
The story has a good flow and the narration or the doctor's experience is horrible.
Possibly the patient is a ghost.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Haunted  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello MellySol,
A poetry that expresses the true feelings of the heart.
Very touching as in a sentimental journey.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines and are most meaningful.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of A Rainy Day  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Taylor Kathryn,
Very creative.
How nice are the chosen words that completed your poetry.
The lines at the second stanza are my favorite lines.
The main reason why it makes me glad when it rains because it makes my plants in the garden smile.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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897
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Greetings to you sanabituranima,
The foreign words caught my interest. Latin ? I thought so.
The English translation made me admire your work from the very beginning until the end.
A true confession of a humble spirit.
So powerful last four lines.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of DEAR ANONYMOUS  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings to you Khalish,
This is a very important letter through a well-written poetry and based on facts through an important note below the poem.
AHA ....I wish everyone in this community read this.
I always find your work filled with wisdom to share.
See you again in this awesome Writing.Com.
My best regards.
Write On.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Greetings to you Sinastri,
You made me very curious to read your word as the title is very captivating.
Oh..Reading between the lines I understand fully why such title was given.
Nice presentation and the story has a good flow.
This can be a beginning of a new novel.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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900
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings to you spidey,
Interesting poll !
Yes, Writing.Com. has a lot of activities to explore, join, and most of all to enjoy and I love them all. Since
the poll is asking about "What is your favorite activity ?" Simply I answer it with the number one in your list and it also is the one that is having the highest score.
Fun and Thank you for the opportunity for me to join.
Write On.
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