Hello purple princess,
What a lovely piece to join two hearts and make them into one.
This is truly full of love and so meaningful.
The presentation is great and this is more touching with the red letters.
Thank you for sharing this to all of us.
Write On.
Hello Venomous Ricky,
This is a very joyful work.
The message is a very positive one and it makes your readers happy and happiness is contagious.
This is like a happy song full of life and enthusiasm.
I love it !
Congratulations for a job well-done !
Keep writing and keep posting.
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By : rogue red
Hello Salome,
This is a wonderful piece that describes the modern world where the men and women belong.
I admire the chosen lines and words that completed this poetry.
It has a good rhyme too.
It also serves as a reflection in every way.
Thank you for sharing your work.
Write On.
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By : rogue red
Hello Knight Master,
An acrostic poetry and I find this very interesting.
It has a good flow and a good rhyme.
A poetry with a questioning soul and has a philosophical message.
I agree with the description "A RARE AND UNIQUE DESIGN"
Wisely written.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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By : rogue red
Hello Aleister,
True to its genre this is really a horror-scary short story.
This is a story that expresses a message of "Run for your life" and yet nowhere to hide.
The story has a good flow.
My suggestion:
"against my better judgement"
Please change the word judgement to....judgment
against my better judgment
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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By : rogue red
Hello J.F.Sherwood,
This is a story that both the children as well as the adults surely enjoy.
Fascinating !
I admire the presentation and the story plot and everything about it.
This is a story that can be kept for a lifetime and to be shared for a lifetime for everyone to appreciate.
Like "The stories in grandma's attic"
I am so glad to have read "The Fable of the Sparrow and the Rose'
Write On.
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By : rogue red
Hello Odie,
Whew ! This is a very horrible story about the bug that victimized Jamie and possibly many more.
This is very convincing as in like a horror movie and the actress and the actors played their parts so well that the viewers are holding their breaths in every scene.
A highly admirable work.
I have nothing to edit here.
The presentation, the grammar, the spelling and the story itself is a very impressive work.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write On.
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By : rogue red
Hello rlwells,
This is a fascinating work of art.
I enjoy reading your very unique poetry.
The presentation amazes me.
I find it an amazing work.
You made me smile reading the last three lines.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Nine Eleven"
Keep writing and keep posting.
Hello Dastoryfella,
A poem that expresses the true feeling sof the heart.
Lovely !
My suggestion:
"It comes the periodically........"
Please delete the word the as in :
It comes periodically..
"Its uplifting..."
Please put an apostrophe in the word It's
It's uplifting....
"ecited "...Please change this to.........excited
"I've tried to contorl it but just cant hide it"
Please change this to:
I've tried to control it but just can't hide it.
Thank you for shaqring your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Hello asho,
This is truly a very inspiring poem that brightens the day.
I love the message that is full of sincerity and an amusing work too.
You are a friend worthy to be loved.
Thank you for sharing "I Believe In You"
Keep writing and keep posting.
Hello vanity rose,
I am happy for you for being a talented person.
This is only an introduction.
I look forward to read more of your work.
My suggestion:
The title:
"im talented everybody needs to know it "
Please change this to:
I'm Talented, Everybody Needs To Know It"
See you again.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Hello Priyanka,
I love reading Haiku poetry.
Usually I find them so concise and so wise.
This is descriptive and yes, about the wonderful nature.
I did not notice any error at all, only it is a bit longer than most haiku poetry that I was able to read.
I admire your work.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Hello Riddle,
First and foremost, I like your users name simply because I love riddles.
This poem is wonderful and I like how you gave its title.
My suggestion:
"And on god who gave you heart"
Please change the word god to.....God
"And on God who gave you heart"
Thank you for sharing "Love Says"
Write On.
Hello Redtowrite,
What love can do to a person...
This is well-written and full of suspense too.
The story behind the poetry is sentimental as in high drama.
How sad is the ending of this love story.
Thank you for sharing "He Would do Anything for Her"
Write On.
Hello Sarah,
The Best ! A great forum.
The poem is so wonderful and very touching as it expresses the essence of true friendship.
I admire this brilliant and most meaningful idea.
I am so glad to have read this and thank you for the opportunity for me to join this forum.
See you again.
Write On and God Bless..
Hello akshendra,
This is a very interesting poll. Nice choices too. You made me laughed some of the choices that's written.
All in one, I enjoy this poll.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to join "parents"
See you again.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Hello ash,
I agree with the message of this poetry.
My suggestion :
"winter & seasons"
Please change this to:
winter and seasons
"Its just like..."
Please put an apostrophe in the word It's
It's just like
"insain"
Please change this to....insane
"Every things unique"
Please change this to:
Every thing is unique.
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On.
Hello J,
Wow...This is amazing !
I like this. The way you presented it in Portuguese language with an English translation, you really made
me very much impressed with your work.
SPLENDID !
Congratulations for a job well-done.
This is truly wonderful.
Thank you very much for the read.
Write On.
Hello Priyanka,
A poetry about nature and the present situation of a particular country, India.
An extended summer season perhaps ?
A poem with a good flow and in a SENRYU form.
Yes, we are also experiencing some very hot season here in the Philippines.
Today, I am so glad that it rains.
Thank you for sharing your work.
Write On.
Hello RX Queen,
A Happy Birthday To You !
This poem is awesome.
It describes of a wonderful journey.
After the storm, here comes the light and the rainbow at the end , is the essence of this wonderful poetry.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
I like it from the start until the last line.
Write On.
Hello Acolyte,
How sad is the message of this poem.
The presentation is wonderful. It has its own beauty and uniqueness.
Deeply emotional as in a sentimental journey.
The chosen words fit for the given title.
Thank you for sharing a job well-done.
Write On.
Hello FHL,
I believe this will be a great story. There is a little editing needed.
My suggestion:
The first line:
"come on....."
Please capitalize the first word , "Come on...."
"Mr. Storyteller, there a man..."
Please chnage this to :
Mr. Storyteller, there's a man..
"was running form..."
Please change this to :
was running from
'"hello my name.."
Please change the word hello to...Hello
"Are you the Storyteller"
Please put a question mark:
Are you the Storyteller"
"should i call you"
Please capitalize the letter I
should I call you
Good luck for the continuation.
Thank you for the read.
Write On.
Hello Tim Chiu,
Wow !
The story behind the poetry expresses joyful moments of life and so full of love, romance and yes !
something to be cherished.
The conclusion if full of life that said it all.
"And harmonious living
In each other's spirited, warm embrace."
Splendid !
I am happy for both of you.
Thank you for sharing "Seeing Her Beauty Again"
Write On.
Hello qween,
Yes, I truly appreciate this piece that looks like a beautiful prose to me.
Yes, friends are real treasures and if you have one, you are truly blessed if you have more then you are loved and doubly blessed.
A true friend is someone who knows you all the way and still loves you just the same.
Thank you for sharing this very inspiring "True Friends"
Keep writing and keep posting and enjoy life with true friends all around.
Hello Venturing into writing,
A very interesting title of a song.
A song that expresses truthfulness and facing life with a courageous spirit of revealing such identity.
A drama that in this generation this song surely will be appreciated.
Gays are making big waves as far as successful lives we are talking about and there is nothing wrong in being gay as far as my personal opinion is concerned.
I wish this song has a happy tune.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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